A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
As a developed country, proportion of rice exported annually stands at the second in the world, most population whose primary income is from farming, however, our nation still not have a professional department for studying agriculture. Thus, if a university intended to operate a new research center, between business and agriculture, I would decide to choose the latter one.
First and foremost, our knowledge about cultivation, irrigation and plants only reaches intermediate level, therefore, our products are evaluated to be at low quality. Moreover, seeds cannot endure over strict weather and their productivity is at average standard. Scientists in that building will conduct some experiments to find out characteristic of our lands in order to give farmers a suitable method for cultivation and preservation. In addition, they also carry out research to improve the percentage of product. For example, previous rice can only be grown in two seasons which are spring and autumn. Thanks to scientific studies from research center, we can produce rice whole year. With such modern measures, our proportion of rice will increase rapidly in few years.
Another reason is that agricultural waste such as pesticide, fertilizer, herbicide and so on have polluted our environment for many decades, although, our government have tried abundant solutions to reduce damage to human and animals. I hope biologists in university can help us to invent a revolutionary method to replace all harmful chemicals that have been pump into the earth. For instance, a large number of lands destroyed now can be revived hopefully by using a special substance to neutralize the remaining dangerous chemicals. An ideal of applying environmentally friendly creatures such as dragonflies to protect plants from destructive insects is an innovative way by these biologists instead of continuing spread pesticide on the fields.
In conclusion, with scientists’ aid of improving agriculture in all aspects, I believe that our path to achieving the nation exporting rice the most will happen soon. Furthermore, I also wish that university will operate one more research center about economic in my country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47197640118 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09526549091 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648967551622 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8437529158 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201745566261 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677448124412 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702645448751 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127107496553 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463171205139 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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