You have applied for a course in a college, but there were no places available. Write a letter to the principal and ask to enrol for the next available course. Include the following:
- Why do you want to do this course?
- What other options would you like to explore?
- Suggest your solution to this situation.
I am writing with regards to the Management course which I have enrolled last week on the 21 of July.
I am one of your student in Azaran college and studying MBA. I have recently passed a job interview and hopefully, did I get the offer. Honestly, do I firmly believe this course would boost my boost business and interpersonal skill As did I enquiry, found out this informative course is conducted with one of your knowledgeable faculty who is nationally famous in this field. This matter makes me even more enthusiastic to participate in his class as soon as possible.
If further enrollment in current semester is not available, I will be grateful if you cloud invite him again for another course which will be held in an upcoming semester. In addition, it would be golden opportunity to have access to all handbooks and other material which are taught in class. As I am aware there are more students who are highly likely to attend in this important course. Therefore, happily will we pay any extra fee that is allocated with the new course.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ent in Azaran college and studying MBA. I have recently passed a job interview an...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her material which are taught in class. As I am aware there are more students who ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['honestly', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.199052132701 0.220444632235 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.170616113744 0.167888034529 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0995260663507 0.0606518309736 164% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0616113744076 0.0506257000042 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0947867298578 0.118615021944 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109004739336 0.107062808482 102% => OK
Participles: 0.042654028436 0.041066498444 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78347174474 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0236966824645 0.0385302599488 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0663507109005 0.0714148451538 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0236966824645 0.0191574576366 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0284360189573 0.00930345855455 306% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1125.0 1141.60824742 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.134020619 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79896907216 5.53046319177 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329896907216 0.284621296913 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231958762887 0.211203875043 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170103092784 0.133321485273 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118556701031 0.0843313296314 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78347174474 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654639175258 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 68.0996778608 62.8969750728 108% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6363636364 16.4300151701 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6806540466 44.7399317507 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.272727273 90.9928171075 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.4300151701 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.613754768223 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 40.832239925 37.5504026743 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.07246376812 1.13073093955 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345403827408 0.331212695627 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0724977705377 0.0927372745006 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0620090713655 0.0736520305886 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575522555874 0.579516596996 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.245865499752 0.180689518051 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116222805966 0.122183219658 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552288533511 0.0765303033291 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.137095914651 0.211926503985 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0735538318646 0.0737400523855 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204233937466 0.203819188451 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393371957951 0.067151250289 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 4.73195876289 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.