tpo 6
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Nowadays, no one can deny the imprortance of lifestyle. Some people may hold the opinion that life today is more easier and people have more convenience than when our grandparents were children. But others have negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree with first opinion because, obviously, technology make everything more easier than past for us. I will try to examine below the specific reasons for my opinion according to which I think are the most common viewpoints today.
First let us look at what a person can typically gain from new lifestyle that we have now. Using technology in every aspect of our life, we have more comfortable life. It goes whitout saying that, unlike the past that people have very hardship in their life, today life for people is better than the era that our grandparents were children. By way of illustration, our anscestors had to made anything such as milk, vegetable and other foods by own. In contrast, today, we can buy anything that we need from many stores in our cities.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. Although, our grandparents during their childhood had more serenity in their life but in other hand they had to tolerate many difficalties. To elucidate on, reaching improvement during these years bring many facilities for us that make our quality of living higher than the past. Take the schools for example, our grandparents when were children they traveled long distance to reach their classes, but with large number of schools today and using cars no students have a little problem for going to school.
Finally, I cannot over see the fact that in the past traveling to other cities means spending a lot of our invaluable time. To shed more light on the issue, according to the result of the study in Tehran University, demands for travelling by the airplane increase every years and it is not only because it is easier for us, but also it is more covinence. Thanks to these airplanes, trains and new car. we can have more disport and recreate.
By taking the adventages of the most recent technology that help us to happier better such as cinema and park, I am convinced that people have a promising prospect in solving many social problems due to depressing.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some esceptions which are escluded from the general rule, I do agree that nowaday we have easier life. To recepitulate the reasons, not only today we can have less dificalties, but also we can experience higher and better lifestyle than the many years ago when our granparents were children.
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Essay evaluation report
life today is more easier
life today is more easy
life today is much easier
technology make everything more easier than
technology makes everything much easier than
Although, our grandparents during their childhood had more serenity in their life but in other hand they had to tolerate many difficalties
Description: don't put 'although' 'but' in one sentence.
our grandparents when were children they traveled long distance
our grandparents traveled long distance when they were children
and it is not only because it is easier for us, but also it is more covinence.
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
not only today we can have less dificalties, but also we can experience higher
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: Nowadays, no one can deny the imprortance of lifestyle.
Error: imprortance Suggestion: importance
Sentence: It goes whitout saying that, unlike the past that people have very hardship in their life, today life for people is better than the era that our grandparents were children.
Error: whitout Suggestion: without
Sentence: By way of illustration, our anscestors had to made anything such as milk, vegetable and other foods by own.
Error: anscestors Suggestion: ancestors
Sentence: Although, our grandparents during their childhood had more serenity in their life but in other hand they had to tolerate many difficalties.
Error: difficalties Suggestion: difficulties
Sentence: To shed more light on the issue, according to the result of the study in Tehran University, demands for travelling by the airplane increase every years and it is not only because it is easier for us, but also it is more covinence.
Error: covinence Suggestion: commence
Sentence: By taking the adventages of the most recent technology that help us to happier better such as cinema and park, I am convinced that people have a promising prospect in solving many social problems due to depressing.
Error: adventages Suggestion: advantages
Sentence: Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some esceptions which are escluded from the general rule, I do agree that nowaday we have easier life.
Error: esceptions Suggestion: exceptions
Error: escluded Suggestion: excluded
Error: nowaday Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To recepitulate the reasons, not only today we can have less dificalties, but also we can experience higher and better lifestyle than the many years ago when our granparents were children.
Error: granparents Suggestion: grandparent
Error: recepitulate Suggestion: recapitulate
Error: dificalties Suggestion: difficulties
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
The conclusion paragraph is not developed well. It should be simpler.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 446 350
No. of Characters: 2090 1500
No. of Different Words: 223 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.596 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.686 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.497 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.691 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.186 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...may hold the opinion that life today is more easier and people have more convenience than w...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
..., obviously, technology make everything more easier than past for us. I will try to examine...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 403, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...to these airplanes, trains and new car. we can have more disport and recreate. ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in contrast', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231237322515 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.156186612576 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0933062880325 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0466531440162 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0851926977688 0.0685040099705 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131845841785 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0365111561866 0.0351676179071 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58583080334 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0283975659229 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0669371196755 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0202839756592 0.0209618222197 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162271805274 0.0139019557991 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2596.0 2387.08602151 109% => OK
No of words: 446.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82062780269 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309417040359 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217488789238 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17264573991 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116591928251 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58583080334 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508968609865 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.0983655623 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2380952381 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7323205089 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.619047619 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2380952381 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 42.9869741619 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.38732394366 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260722123426 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0681190562229 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0468842452697 0.0752933317313 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491878796358 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201069931112 0.151897553556 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922353967173 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080994197828 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278847514053 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0561303902336 0.067059652881 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164672487361 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646564806648 0.0618886996521 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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