TPO 16- Q1
The article states that the United kingdom has a very long and rich history of human settlement. Traces of tools and art has been discovered from thousands of years ago. However, the science of archaeology which examine and study the old cultural artifacts has experienced a lot of serious problems.The article provides three reason for that which the speaker refutes all of the reasons. She says new rules has been signed, these rules has changed the science of archaeology in a very good way.
First, the reading states that many important and sensitive artifacts were lost while constructing building projects. Digging foundations for building new houses and new projects has uncovered many valuable archaeological sites, which many of them are destroyed. The speaker refutes this by explaining that new rules have forced construction companies to inform the archaeologist to verify every new field and site, whether there are any old tools in that site or not. If there are, many organs like local government make plan to extract these things from that field and give them to the archaeologist.
Second, the writing claims that the archaeologists are not supported financially and the money is not enough for them. The lecturer refutes it by saying that, the process of extracting and studying the elicited materials are paid by construction companies that provide a great financial support for the archaeologists, and allow them to study and explore more.
Third, the reading says that it is difficult to have a job in archaeology field; because universities and government were going to provide positions for them, but now many who wanted to be archaeologists ended up pursuing the job. The speaker refutes this. She says more work have been provided for archaeologists through all stages of the process of verifying, extracting, and researching the elicited stuff. Actually, the United kingdom now has the highest number of archeologist now, compared to old times.
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Essay evaluation report
Traces of tools and art has been discovered
Traces of tools and art have been discovered
The article provides three reason for that which the speaker refutes all of the reasons
The article provides three reason for that while the speaker refutes all of the reasons
new rules has been signed, these rules has changed the science
new rules have been signed, these rules have changed the science
flaws:
No. of Words: 319 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 319 250
No. of Characters: 1620 1200
No. of Different Words: 160 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.078 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.813 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.973 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.338 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.564 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.178 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Actually, I typed it in 20
Actually, I typed it in 20 minutes.
so I should write fewer words, right?
Better leave 2-3 minutes for
Better leave 2-3 minutes for grammar and spelling checks. Around 250 words are enough. Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The article states that the United kingd...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...s experienced a lot of serious problems.The article provides three reason for that ...
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ason for that which the speaker refutes all of the reasons. She says new rules has been si...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce of archaeology in a very good way. First, the reading states that many i...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and give them to the archaeologist. Second, the writing claims that the arch...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llow them to study and explore more. Third, the reading says that it is diffi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235632183908 0.261695866417 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.195402298851 0.158904122519 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0948275862069 0.0723426182421 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0402298850575 0.0435111971325 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0258620689655 0.0277247811725 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109195402299 0.128828473217 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0775862068966 0.0370669169778 209% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.88091679489 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258620689655 0.0208969081088 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00287356321839 0.00154638098197 186% => OK
Determiners: 0.117816091954 0.128158765124 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014367816092 0.0114777025283 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1992.0 1645.83664459 121% => OK
No of words: 318.0 271.125827815 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2641509434 6.08160592843 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.04852973271 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367924528302 0.374372842146 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292452830189 0.287516216867 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185534591195 0.187439937562 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138364779874 0.113142543107 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88091679489 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.539623497131 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.893693771 53.8517498576 108% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0529801325 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7142857143 21.7502111507 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.970551607 49.3711431718 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.285714286 132.220823453 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 21.7502111507 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.878197800319 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.39072847682 177% => OK
Readability: 51.9595687332 50.5018328374 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.61538461538 1.90840788429 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.678061919019 0.549887131256 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12871176402 0.142949733639 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0701899600974 0.0787303798458 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597595037515 0.631733273073 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146831792846 0.139662658121 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.301150118011 0.266732575781 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904154486554 0.103435571967 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.373693349963 0.414875509568 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0669167495249 0.0530846634433 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.488146594336 0.40443939384 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459092122575 0.0528353158467 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.62251655629 166% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.