TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Being satisfied with what you are doing is very important because if you like it, you do it better. Some people think workers are more happy when they do different types of tasks during workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. In my view, doing new thinngs can make workers happier for few reasons which I explain them below.
First, when workers do new things, their minds are engaged to master that task, so they become very busy to figure out every detail of the new task. For example, I used to work for a mobile company, and I had to connect different components of the processor of the mobile phone. When I had to put together a new type of phone I had to focus really hard to do it correctly and not to make mistakes; however, after a while doing it I became reckless in connecting the components, so I connected the wrong components to each other.
Second, doing a same job for a long period of time is very boring because you feel like you are a machine not a human. For example, I had a friend who was responsible for typing articles for a newspaper. He was in charge of this task for six hours each day nearly for ten years. He was very unsatisfied with his job, and sometimes he started to sleep on his work because he was very tired of the task.
Third, doing new things during workday gives more experience to the workers because they get to be familiar with new types of situations and new types of problems. For instance, a very famous company allows its workers to solve a new puzzle each day after doing the normal work. This way, the minds of its workers are challenged and sometimes they debate and argue on the right answer, so the new and different puzzles for each day help the workers to broaden their thoughts to new field of subjects and become expert in that field.
Basically, there are three reasons that doing different things during a workday can help employees to be happier and increase their efficiency: first, workers are engaged to master the new task; second, doing a repetitive task is very boring; third, it gives more experience to the workers.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: In my view, doing new thinngs can make workers happier for few reasons which I explain them below.
Error: thinngs Suggestion: things
flaws:
1. No. of Different Words: 173 200 //we are expecting 200 words which are different.
2. Don't make essays like a technical report, like:
first, workers are engaged to master the new task; second, doing a repetitive task is very boring; third, it gives more experience to the workers.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 1672 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.354 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.246 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.933 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.379 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.63 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... Second, doing a same job for a long period of time is very boring because you feel like yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, second, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32690124437 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466145833333 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0589999108 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.428571429 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325862515682 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132365143821 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161405500961 0.0737576698707 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214057791927 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130165656157 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.