TPO24-INTEGRATED
In this set of materials, the reading states that the researchers exposed some materials that seems to be remain of blood vessels, red blood cells, and collagen matrix and brings up three different hypthesises to support. However, the lecture finds all the discovery incorrect and provides some evidence to refute them all.
First of all, the author of the passage claims that there is interesting findings that show the presence of a soft, flexible organic substance inside the channels and they are the remains of actual bloods. In contrast, the lecture argues that they are not necessary blood and might be something else because these animals die long time ago and there are some bacterias inside the channels and these soft substance are likely the trace of bacterias.
Furthermore, it is mentioned in the reading passage that there are other evidences that prove the remains of red blood cells. On the contrary, the lecture contends that red blood cells come from different origions and other same places.
Finally, the author is of the opinion that the test exposed the collagen in the bone. Conversely, the lecture explains that red blood cells never found in the animals that died more than 100000 years ago while this dinosaur has 70 million years. So this idea is a big contradiction with science's fact. In fact they come from other sources for instance from the skin of who handeling the bone.
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Essay evaluation report
some materials that seems to be remain of blood vessels
some materials that seem to be the remains of blood vessels
there is interesting findings
there are interesting findings
red blood cells never found in the animals
red blood cells are never found in the animals
from the skin of who handeling the bone.
from the skin which is handling the bone.
Sentence: In this set of materials, the reading states that the researchers exposed some materials that seems to be remain of blood vessels, red blood cells, and collagen matrix and brings up three different hypthesises to support.
Error: hypthesises Suggestion: hypothesizes
Sentence: On the contrary, the lecture contends that red blood cells come from different origions and other same places.
Error: origions Suggestion: origins
Sentence: In fact they come from other sources for instance from the skin of who handeling the bone.
Error: handeling Suggestion: handling
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Read a good grammar book.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 237 250
No. of Characters: 1146 1200
No. of Different Words: 124 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.924 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.835 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.339 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.7 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.9 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.9 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.649 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are interesting findings'?
Suggestion: there are interesting findings
..., the author of the passage claims that there is interesting findings that show the presence of a soft, flexi...
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Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...r sources for instance from the skin of who handeling the bone.
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'first of all', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267441860465 0.261695866417 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.131782945736 0.158904122519 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0852713178295 0.0723426182421 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0426356589147 0.0435111971325 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0193798449612 0.0277247811725 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131782945736 0.128828473217 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0116279069767 0.0370669169778 31% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.40382676037 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0116279069767 0.0208969081088 56% => OK
Particles: 0.00387596899225 0.00154638098197 251% => OK
Determiners: 0.139534883721 0.128158765124 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00387596899225 0.0158828679856 24% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193798449612 0.0114777025283 169% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1413.0 1645.83664459 86% => OK
No of words: 237.0 271.125827815 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96202531646 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337552742616 0.374372842146 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26582278481 0.287516216867 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177215189873 0.187439937562 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0970464135021 0.113142543107 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40382676037 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.539623497131 103% => OK
Word variations: 53.7757209389 53.8517498576 100% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6205410731 49.3711431718 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.3 132.220823453 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 0.878197800319 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 50.282278481 50.5018328374 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.12 1.90840788429 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.690830991473 0.549887131256 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.171604093693 0.142949733639 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0800999390937 0.0787303798458 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.679030870418 0.631733273073 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177181015057 0.139662658121 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.350213886049 0.266732575781 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162694212368 0.103435571967 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.421820578547 0.414875509568 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0445209592551 0.0530846634433 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.504272334616 0.40443939384 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032264890104 0.0528353158467 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.