There are so many reason that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Due to the fact that telling truth will affect both society and relationship, I think it need more consideration in people way of life. In fact , the most important thing is trust. people that have trust on each ather have higher ability in future comunication and are able to handle difficult situation together.
The first effect of truth is trust, In fact, the more people are honest the higher ability the have to trust in each other. For example, the main thing for two person that are in relationship with each other or a person that is sending an addmission to a company is honesty.
People can rely on each other, if you are not responsible for your actions or do not tell the truth, you will distroy your face in front of other peoples so you are not able to comunicate with the other people that are familiar with your behaviour. For instance, when I was in the college, I had a friend that was not responsible for his words effect that forced me to stay aside of him.
If you tell lie you will affect the society as well as the people that are around you. In other words, the people who do not say truth can make the belief that untruth condition can take you a higher position in the society as well as job condition.
For instance, If you are working in the company which you see a lot of people that do not tell the truth about their working status to the manager and have higher degree in the company, you will follow them. so that this will prevent the company and it is able to being preared to the difficult situations. Also, the government that do not say truth to the people will affect its people way of thinking. Thus, it is not able to direct the people in the correct way and the people will not obey it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
There are so many reason that telling the truth is the most impo...
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Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ideration in people way of life. In fact , the most important thing is trust. peop...
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Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ct , the most important thing is trust. people that have trust on each ather have high...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ust, In fact, the more people are honest the higher ability the have to trust in ...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...er. For example, the main thing for two person that are in relationship with each othe...
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Line 11, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e in the company, you will follow them. so that this will prevent the company and ...
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Line 11, column 264, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...l prevent the company and it is able to being preared to the difficult situations. Al...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in fact', 'as well as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208108108108 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.159459459459 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0864864864865 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0567567567568 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0702702702703 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118918918919 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0189189189189 0.0351676179071 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34268487961 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0297297297297 0.0309702414327 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110810810811 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027027027027 0.0209618222197 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0297297297297 0.0139019557991 214% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1852.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 343.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39941690962 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.268221574344 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.148688046647 0.251872472559 59% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0874635568513 0.174417080927 50% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.069970845481 0.112833075102 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34268487961 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425655976676 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.7519382121 59.2087087015 72% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7261890512 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.285714286 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.644075263715 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 39.3688046647 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.20754716981 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401279709664 0.300154397459 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.204076067169 0.103427244359 197% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.10000326098 0.0752933317313 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.678580978571 0.497263757937 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115313033757 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214578809238 0.114077575197 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075886484398 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.410951908906 0.336927656856 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0638241812489 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281949991585 0.210909579961 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546599993707 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.