TPO31-INTEGRATED
In this set of materials, the reading states that critics have a negative opinion about a idea that dinosaurs have feather and brings up three different hypotheses to support. However, the lecture finds all the ideas unconvincing and believes there are very strong evidence to prove the existence of a feathered dinosaur and provides some evidence to refute the reading's ideas.
First of all, the author of the passage claims that the fine lines are the trace of skin fibers and not the the evidence of feathers. In contrast, the lecture argues that researchers do not see any such decomposition on other animals and the function structure of dinosaurs can be preserved during the time and these lines are possibly the feathers.
Furthermore, it is mentioned in the reading passage that even they are a real structure of dinosaur's body, they may be frills. On the contrary, the lecture contends that they are frills because by chemical experiment results frills contain protein and featheres do not contain protein. Also, this experiment shows that remains do not contain protein as the feathers.
Finally, the author is of the opinion that birds need feather for thermoregulation and fly while the structures represented that the lines were mostly in the backbone and the tail of animal which is useless for those purposes. Conversely, the lecture explains that these animals probably use these feathers for display using as the some animals use it for the mate. Also, the feather were orange and white and colorful. So, it is more possible that serve the feather for display.
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Essay evaluation report
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Sentence: First of all, the author of the passage claims that the fine lines are the trace of skin fibers and not the the evidence of feathers.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to the and the
it is more possible that serve the feather for display.
it is more possible to serve the feather for display.
Sentence: On the contrary, the lecture contends that they are frills because by chemical experiment results frills contain protein and featheres do not contain protein.
Error: featheres Suggestion: feathers
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 262 250
No. of Characters: 1292 1200
No. of Different Words: 136 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.931 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.564 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.193 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.909 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.632 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t critics have a negative opinion about a idea that dinosaurs have feather and br...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'feathered'.
Suggestion: feathered
...pinion about a idea that dinosaurs have feather and brings up three different hypothese...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...es are the trace of skin fibers and not the the evidence of feathers. In contrast, the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...es are the trace of skin fibers and not the the evidence of feathers. In contrast, the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...these feathers for display using as the some animals use it for the mate. Also, the ...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'in contrast', 'first of all', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252631578947 0.261695866417 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.154385964912 0.158904122519 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0561403508772 0.0723426182421 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0701754385965 0.0435111971325 161% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0210526315789 0.0277247811725 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.128828473217 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0140350877193 0.0370669169778 38% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.62617886932 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0105263157895 0.0208969081088 50% => OK
Particles: 0.00350877192982 0.00154638098197 227% => OK
Determiners: 0.150877192982 0.128158765124 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00701754385965 0.0158828679856 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105263157895 0.0114777025283 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1585.0 1645.83664459 96% => OK
No of words: 262.0 271.125827815 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04961832061 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04852973271 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370229007634 0.374372842146 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309160305344 0.287516216867 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198473282443 0.187439937562 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114503816794 0.113142543107 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62617886932 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530534351145 0.539623497131 98% => OK
Word variations: 51.6502308255 53.8517498576 96% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8181818182 21.7502111507 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1191302571 49.3711431718 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.090909091 132.220823453 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 21.7502111507 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 0.878197800319 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.39072847682 147% => OK
Readability: 54.7342123525 50.5018328374 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.62857142857 1.90840788429 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.73031118725 0.549887131256 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.187490367913 0.142949733639 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110034186992 0.0787303798458 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.681558515364 0.631733273073 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13637325866 0.139662658121 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.357293503779 0.266732575781 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167112688696 0.103435571967 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372152896619 0.414875509568 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0636109090499 0.0530846634433 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.523437324925 0.40443939384 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125366095405 0.0528353158467 237% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.