According to the first chart, the UK graduates in 2008, except go into full-time work, the majority of them continued their studies, which account for 29,655. Another main destination of graduates is part-time work, taking up 17,735 students. Unfortunately, 16,235 students can't find job after finishing their courses and only a little of graduates have willing to be volunteers with 3,500.
As for the below chart which shows postgraduates' destination, the scale is quite similar with graduates'. However, less rate for further study with 2,725 and more for part-time work taking up 2,535. And 1,625 postgraduates are still unemployed. The rate of voluntary works is least with 345.
In summary, most graduates or postgraduates in UK prefer studying further to finding a part-time job. Quite a little students choose to devote themselves into voluntary work.
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tudents. Unfortunately, 16,235 students cant find job after finishing their courses ...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...finding a part-time job. Quite a little students choose to devote themselves into volunt...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'still', 'as for', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21568627451 0.268076937826 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.130718954248 0.116061578633 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.130718954248 0.0759168565197 172% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0392156862745 0.0366838410393 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0261437908497 0.0131127313244 199% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130718954248 0.155750635184 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0392156862745 0.0379272487307 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87342489805 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261437908497 0.0210936926555 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0130718954248 0.00175180941692 746% => OK
Determiners: 0.0653594771242 0.0948980150116 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130718954248 0.00967000014798 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 862.0 1161.00487805 74% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.9 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38518518519 5.90752243213 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73763899035 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.392592592593 0.337110787985 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296296296296 0.247514529752 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.22962962963 0.171178102325 134% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.177777777778 0.112407865282 158% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87342489805 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.546246751206 122% => OK
Word variations: 61.7636809913 49.3433353143 125% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0094962315 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0698373278 42.9750493124 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 23.0094962315 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.689975730869 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 44.6296296296 47.7609492067 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.96666666667 2.94281807926 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253712083303 0.418131533498 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0596793348559 0.181151798455 33% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0422615268676 0.0850326197045 50% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530929684471 0.706616315825 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118638178972 0.157042692854 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105084343376 0.228904883108 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554522876616 0.108899403657 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.200239260089 0.367819155151 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0924349797066 0.0812612215331 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17003247842 0.316326947829 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572654847312 0.0921553760075 62% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.