Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Neighbours play an important role in our lives, and almost everyone in the world has at least one neighbor. For this reason, it is important to consider what characteristics define a good neighbor. In my opinion, a good neighbor is both supportive and respectful. I will explore the reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, a good neighbor must be supportive because our lives are full of unplanned emergencies. Oftentimes the people live close to us are the only ones who can provide assistance when things go wrong. For example, my family experienced a major house fire several years ago. It was a traumatic experience as it happened in the middle of the night and we lost most of our belongings. Though none of us suffered any injuries, we did experience a lot of emotional trauma. Our situation was aided, however, by a compassionate neighbor who immediately called the fire department upon noticing the fire and who also provided us with clean clothes, food and a place to stay for the night. This example demonstrates how important it is to have kind and supportive neighbors when an emergency happens.
Moreover, a good neighbor is someone who is respectful of those around him. People view their home as a sort of sanctuary from the stressful modern world and if their neighbors do not respect this belief they will suffer a lot. My own experience demonstrates this reality. Five years ago, I lived alone in an apartment in a busy city. My job at that time was extremely stressful and also physically draining. After a day at work I wanted nothing more than to go home and unwind. However, the person living in the apartment above me played loud music all night which made it almost impossible for me to relax. He had no respect for those around him and thought only of himself. In contrast, the person who lives above my family today does not do this and though I have the same job, I am better able to deal with its difficulties. This illustrates the value of having a neighbor who respects those who live nearby.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that good neighbors are both supportive and respectful. This is because such people can help us handle life’s unexpected emergencies and allow us to feel comfortable in our own homes.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'at least', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'sort of', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20728929385 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.152619589977 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911161731207 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0478359908884 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0888382687927 0.0685040099705 130% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.109339407745 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.00911161731207 0.0351676179071 26% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.79416511982 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0205011389522 0.0309702414327 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113895216401 0.0887237588012 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0113895216401 0.0209618222197 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0296127562642 0.0139019557991 213% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2360.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 397.0 408.028673835 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94458438287 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317380352645 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234256926952 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191435768262 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138539042821 0.112833075102 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79416511982 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549118387909 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 62.6791554123 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2608695652 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3267896417 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.608695652 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2608695652 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 40.6865622604 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.12598425197 1.45489161554 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373443336072 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0530183776336 0.103427244359 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0596228033653 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.397015817689 0.497263757937 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143626967544 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116108911713 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692141366271 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288459050105 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0874715624766 0.067059652881 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257527528061 0.210909579961 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290480976941 0.0618886996521 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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