Dear Sir or Madam, recently in the district where i live and a lot of people near by have had the same problem, in general every so often they lose internet connection in a house. The documents could not be downloaded and even working online in a programs does not work properly.
With this in mind, people who do the same work as me and have to do their work directly through the internet are needed it well working twenty-four hours in a day. Otherwise while lack of internet connection, they lose their income and can not even make a simple action with credit cards.
Accordingly i write this report to your compony with a big hope and confidence of your good reputation, that solving of this problem will not take long time. Besides, i would like you to check conditional of the internet wire between the houses, because of recent works have been done in the ground.
Faithfully Veronika Martys.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r Madam, recently in the district where i live and a lot of people near by have h...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...strict where i live and a lot of people near by have had the same problem, in general e...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a program' or simply 'programs'?
Suggestion: a program; programs
...e downloaded and even working online in a programs does not work properly. With this in...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...ell working twenty-four hours in a day. Otherwise while lack of internet connection, they...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
...e a simple action with credit cards. Accordingly i write this report to your compony wit...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ction with credit cards. Accordingly i write this report to your compony with ...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oblem will not take long time. Besides, i would like you to check conditional of ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'besides', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257142857143 0.268076937826 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.137142857143 0.116061578633 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0628571428571 0.0759168565197 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.08 0.0366838410393 218% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0514285714286 0.0131127313244 392% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.155750635184 92% => OK
Participles: 0.04 0.0379272487307 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45130029055 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0171428571429 0.0210936926555 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102857142857 0.0948980150116 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0228571428571 0.00437022459523 523% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114285714286 0.00967000014798 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 905.0 1161.00487805 78% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.9 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62111801242 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298136645963 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217391304348 0.247514529752 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.171178102325 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0745341614907 0.112407865282 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45130029055 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664596273292 0.546246751206 122% => OK
Word variations: 65.7047674602 49.3433353143 133% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0094962315 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6428035982 42.9750493124 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.285714286 135.714022679 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.0094962315 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.689975730869 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.48048780488 473% => OK
Readability: 44.7391304348 47.7609492067 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.63829787234 2.94281807926 56% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344904552715 0.418131533498 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0979668357003 0.181151798455 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0577805060295 0.0850326197045 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.70931873477 0.706616315825 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146245089723 0.157042692854 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147351408988 0.228904883108 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965910874617 0.108899403657 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.183269141188 0.367819155151 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.137094994437 0.0812612215331 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184011766487 0.316326947829 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109154042204 0.0921553760075 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.