The quality of our neighbors play an important role in the quality of our life. It often determines the happiness of our lifes. In my view, the two most important qualities that a good neighbor should have is trustworthiness and the amount of care they take about their neighborhood, for the following reasons.
First, of you trust your neighbor, you can easly leave your valuable things with them and ask them to take care of them while you are away. This is very important, because sometimes we really need to have a neighbor who we can trust them on this things. For example, I remmeber when I was a child, both of my parents had to earn enaugh money to be able to aford the expences of the food and housing and so on. So, when they were out at work they needed someone to take care of me. Sometimes they took me to my gradparents home, but usully they were too busy to take care of us, so more often they took me to one of our naighbor's home and asked them to keep an eye on me. I can still recall their friendly faces. They were so good to me and I used to learned a lot when I was there. They used to read me historical books which was really intresting and I got to learn too. My parents always told me that they were so lucky to have such good and trustworthy neighbors and they think if they were in a bad neighborhood, they would have had to spend a lot of money for hiring someone to take care of me. This experince tought me that one of the important charactristics of a good neighbor is his/her trustworthiness.
Second, beautifull neighborhoods usully have neat people living in them. It is very important to have a pretty neighborhood, becasue it is where we spend most of our times. For example, about 7 years age we where in a very bad neighborhood, because most of the people living in that place did not care about their garden our how clean their outer yards were. So, everytime we had a guess, they would talk badly about our place and they even though we were like them. So, we had to move from that place, only because the neighbors did not care about how that place lookded like.
In sum, the quality of our neighbors affects our life in so many ways. They determine how safe we feel about our security and also the way that our neighborhood looks like. So we should all care about living in a place with good neighbors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ave a neighbor who we can trust them on this things. For example, I remmeber when I ...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nces of the food and housing and so on. So, when they were out at work they needed someo...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: THEY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'were', the simple past of "to be"?
Suggestion: were
...imes. For example, about 7 years age we where in a very bad neighborhood, because mos...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'for example', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.169421487603 0.229887763892 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.154958677686 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0640495867769 0.0866891130778 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0723140495868 0.046263068375 156% => OK
Pronouns: 0.152892561983 0.0685040099705 223% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121900826446 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.00826446280992 0.0351676179071 24% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.45252503692 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0392561983471 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.00206611570248 0.00188951952338 109% => OK
Determiners: 0.0702479338843 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0144628099174 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0206611570248 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2352.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 443.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30925507901 5.86048508987 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.212189616253 0.338922669872 63% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.144469525959 0.251872472559 57% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.103837471783 0.174417080927 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.079006772009 0.112833075102 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45252503692 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440180586907 0.524397521467 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.2336129199 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0952380952 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8478410389 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0952380952 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 35.5421906912 45.7405998639 78% => OK
Elegance: 0.788043478261 1.45489161554 54% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22926363722 0.300154397459 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140306829734 0.103427244359 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0978139358254 0.0752933317313 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.511666639734 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169983243859 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090145323431 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660650233755 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331529906901 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0742691234919 0.067059652881 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178878560039 0.210909579961 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635235403231 0.0618886996521 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.