Cycling has many benefits, yet in some countries, there is a decrease in numbers of people using bicycles as their main form of transportation. Why is it happening? Give suggestions how to encourage people to use bicycles.
Cycling is an effective measure of many problems related to the environment and health of today's world. However, there is a noticeable decline in the use of a bicycle as their main form of commutation in many countries. Here, I would like to discuss few of the reasons behind this negative development with the possible suggestion to encourage people to use bicycles.
To commence with, in today's fast pace life, everyone is in the rush to reach their destination. People complaining about the lack of timing which seems an absolute alibi. The lack of time management and slipping into the more comfortable life are the more visible reason behind this trivial excuse which supports them to avoid the use of cycle for their routine traveling. Moreover, cycling demands physical efforts compare to any other mode of transportation. Arguably, cycling toward the workplace can leave the person fatigue to start the day.In many countries,the landscape and the weather don't allow the people to use the bicycle.
Apart from the physical and weather conditions, there is fewer economic convenience which gave a push to the use of public transport and private vehicles for the routine use. Developed network of public transport and the cheaper rate of tickets gave the motivation to use public transport to the mediocre people. Moreover, easy availability of financial supports and smooth process for vehicle purchase has lead to increasing volume of private vehicles in the cities. Nonetheless , use of the car and the private vehicle has become a status symbol for individuals. Under the fact of above reasons , people mostly avoids the use of the bicycle for the commutation.
Seeing a huge environmental and physical benefit of cycling, it needs to be promoted by the government of each country. The government can impose a rule of one day a week as a cycling day so that every citizen would be guided to use the bicycle for that particular day. Secondly, the government can declare incentive on the reduction of carbon credit through cycling to the individual who adopts the cycling as their routine commutation. Thirdly, community groups should spread more awareness about the benefits of cycling on health and environment among the society. Also, many motivational programs can be conducted to promote it further. Last but not the least, every parent should motivate their children to use the bicycle as a part of their good habits.
All in all, cultivating a habit of cycling can help to fight with many emerging issues related to the health of individuals and the environment . Therefore, spreading awareness and designing improved traffic regulation can help in developing cycling as a habit in every citizen of the country.
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Essay evaluation report
People complaining about the lack of timing
People are complaining about the lack of timing
are the more visible reason
are the more visible reasons
cycling demands physical efforts compare to any other mode
cycling demands physical efforts compared to any other mode
people mostly avoids the use
people mostly avoid the use
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Words: 449 while No. of Different Words: 224 //maybe less words on the second and third paragraph
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-grader is sensitive.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 449 350
No. of Characters: 2235 1500
No. of Different Words: 224 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.603 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.978 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.709 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 178 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 139 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.381 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.168 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...decline in the use of a bicycle as their main form of commutation in many countri...
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...ave the person fatigue to start the day.In many countries,the landscape and the we...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'apart from']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279835390947 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.117283950617 0.155533422707 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0905349794239 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0349794238683 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0205761316872 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131687242798 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0411522633745 0.0403226058552 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80480573014 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0432098765432 0.0326793684256 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.139917695473 0.0861772015684 162% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205761316872 0.021408717616 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0082304526749 0.011925033212 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2753.0 1933.35771543 142% => OK
No of words: 449.0 316.048096192 142% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13140311804 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.20517956788 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.405345211581 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311804008909 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200445434298 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129175946548 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80480573014 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.037074148 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514476614699 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 59.1180685183 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.380952381 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8238196167 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.095238095 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.380952381 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.814263465372 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.99599198397 350% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.5613532718 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.61904761905 1.69124875643 155% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293710378302 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121788931429 0.102741220458 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0926259589204 0.0668466124924 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598769751414 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152270639062 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145553545858 0.134430193775 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696887435133 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.505449223646 0.324371583561 156% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0727672612896 0.0638462369009 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23913244807 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966443394893 0.058150111329 166% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.90881763527 220% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 10.4468937876 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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