Many people choose to live alone. What do you think the advantages of living alone are and do they outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people tend to live by themselves for several reasons, but the prominent reasons are the independent and freedom. Despite those advantages (independent and freedom) of living alone, disadvantages of living alone can be the responsibility for having freedom and the financial burdens. In my perspective, the worth of responsibility for those freedoms and independence is weighing more than that of benefits, because the consequences from those freedom and independent can have fatal damages.
There are various purposes for people to live by themselves but among those, the primary purpose would be the independent. People can be independent from young age by moved out of their houses to pursue their dreams. People can become independent by controlling their finances and emotions. Since all the living expenses are paid by individual household, the money should be budgeted in advance in order to pay for living expenses. Also, all the decisions can be made by themselves which can enhance their independency.
Another reason for people to live alone is the freedom. Since people are free from parents' nagging, scolding and interrupting with their decisions, they can enjoy their own lifestyles. In the case of go home late or stay up all night without family's interventions can be seen as an example of freedom lifestyles. Therefore, it is other reason for people to live by themselves, to seek for freedom.
Nevertheless, there are always dark side for every phenomenon. Likewise, the dark side for this issue is the responsibility for those freedoms. People have to make their own decisions and the consequences on that decisions have to be managed. Sometimes, they can make wrong decisions due to inexperience and immaturity, and which can be phenomenal impact on their lifestyles. For instance, people often believe their driving skills are better off after drinking and by showing off some driving skills can lead to fatal damages. From this people have to be responsible for the damages and in the worst case, it can cost other people's lives.
In addition, financial burden is another problem to a single household. All the living expenses or other expenses related to daily activities supposed to be managed by people. With their inexperience in budgeting and planning for saving the money, living alone can be challenging. The impulsive spending habit can be formed and which can lead to uncontrollable spending lead to bankruptcy. Hence, insufficient manage of that budgeting can lead to credit default.
To summarise, every issue has its benefits and drawbacks and which is equivalent to this case. Living alone can provide the freedom and independent lifestyles, but it is inevitable to face the responsibilities and financial burden. As far as I am concerned, there are both negatives and positives to this system, but as a conclusion, the negatives seem to far outweigh the positives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
... independent and freedom. Despite those advantages independent and freedom of living alone...
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Line 1, column 441, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this freedom' or 'those freedoms'?
Suggestion: this freedom; those freedoms
...benefits, because the consequences from those freedom and independent can have fatal damages....
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Line 4, column 534, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... skills can lead to fatal damages. From this people have to be responsible for the d...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'likewise', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23166023166 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.156370656371 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0849420849421 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0289575289575 0.0501214627716 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.042471042471 0.0437548338989 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1138996139 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0444015444015 0.0403226058552 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00422694663 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0444015444015 0.0326793684256 136% => OK
Particles: 0.003861003861 0.00163938923432 236% => OK
Determiners: 0.0907335907336 0.0861772015684 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0366795366795 0.021408717616 171% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00772200772201 0.011925033212 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2909.0 1933.35771543 150% => OK
No of words: 467.0 316.048096192 148% => OK
Chars per words: 6.22912205567 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.20517956788 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374732334047 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289079229122 0.28420135186 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216274089936 0.203846283523 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160599571734 0.137316102897 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00422694663 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.037074148 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462526766595 0.56093040696 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.0072924288 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0891783567 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9615384615 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7133656029 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.884615385 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9615384615 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.814263465372 47% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 46.8694613737 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.71186440678 1.69124875643 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345254413253 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116114839367 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0919415882409 0.0668466124924 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526127531045 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116152944209 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131887412307 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769194373223 0.0742795772207 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.379119274937 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0283620160595 0.0638462369009 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234165282264 0.228012699653 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541969329481 0.058150111329 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.