Each and every person has pressure and tension of securing a decent job after completion of his/her graduation. This pressure to meet financial desires leads a person to go for irreverent work. Money is important thing in life but it is inconvenient to choose unsatisfactory work to earn it. One should go for satisfying work.
The primary reason for choosing self satisfaction over money is, personal interest. According to human tendency, person is more efficient in doing a work of his/her interest. Even psychology suggests that the happiness of the person is related to the kind of work he does. For an example, if a person has refined interest in music and he/she chooses a technical job just to grab the opportunity then the chances are more to get bored of the work. This may lead to lose his/her job eventually due to lack of interest and efficiency. On the other hand, if the same person goes for the job in music field, he/she will not get tired of doing things and ultimately his/her output will be much more. This may lead a person to promotion in terms of money/salary, mental satisfaction and at a stage of happiness as well.
Apart from that, there are few more disadvantages of choosing uncertain job. The person can go into depression due to lack of happiness and mental instability due to lack of feelings of being wanted or appreciated. In general it is seen that each person wants to feel special and appreciated by people for whom they work for. So, the satisfactory job will always lead them to more output and finally to the state of being appreciated. The other advantages of doing satisfactory job are relaxation from work load, stress free working conditions, pleasant working environment, security of the job due to efficient work output, support from the colleagues, family and many more.
Thus, it is wise decision to go for self satisfying jobs rather than enrolling into any ordinary work. It is recommended to choose a job by considering long term factors. It is like falling into trap by grabbing the available opportunity.
- Describe main topics discussed in lecture, show how they cast doubt on the ideas presented in the passage. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit Use specific reasons and examples to support your position 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position." 76
- summarize the points made in the lecture, also state how they cast doubt on the information presented in the passage. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 40
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 429, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...tunity then the chances are more to get bored of the work. This may lead to lose his/her...
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Line 6, column 654, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ork output, support from the colleagues, family and many more. Thus, it is wi...
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Line 8, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by grabbing the available opportunity.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'apart from', 'in general', 'kind of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235751295337 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.173575129534 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116580310881 0.0866891130778 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0362694300518 0.046263068375 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0259067357513 0.0685040099705 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132124352332 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0699481865285 0.0351676179071 199% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.82228905446 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0492227979275 0.0309702414327 159% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0880829015544 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181347150259 0.0209618222197 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00259067357513 0.0139019557991 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2073.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87252124646 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314447592068 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235127478754 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181303116147 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133144475921 0.112833075102 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82228905446 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.7040777952 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5789473684 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.502170883 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.105263158 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 42.0916952438 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.85714285714 1.45489161554 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262535613553 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109148464716 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0678912317586 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516928634524 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119422664551 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108497037797 0.114077575197 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517396723875 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364820789398 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.144338919951 0.067059652881 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179678621061 0.210909579961 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382006417012 0.0618886996521 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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