By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Life in prison is the most effective punishment for criminals who killed innocent people than that of a capital punishment, because this can be viewed as committing of another murders by killing of murderers. However, I do believe that the punishment should be meet its criteria of purpose of punishment, which involves with the education of criminals as well as revising their behaviours.
Life sentences would be the most suitable punishment for criminals because they can get times to consider about their past mistakes. If the criminals would be sentenced to death penalty, the criminals may not recognise of their mistakes and they might feel the unfairness with the results. However, if let the criminals to live in prison, they could think about their current situation and this thought can lead to feeling of regrets and sorrows for the victims.
The purpose of punishment is educating criminals for their wrong behaviours so that they can become a society member. The instructors can provide the moral, ethic and justice information to educate prisoners, while the prisoners can understand the theories by doing voluntary works at a local community, for instance. Therefore, the criminals can understand their own past mistakes and can become a new person by actively helping others.
In terms of capital punishment, it does not have its purpose of education. When criminals get educated, they would get the time to reconsider of their past mistakes and revise their behaviours. However, in terms of the capital punishment, it does not give enough time for criminals to reconsider of their past mistakes. Therefore, it cannot be said that this is the most effective method to punish criminals.
In conclusion, the death penalty can be seen as violation of criminal act of killing a person and it does not provide the insufficient time for penance. Therefore, life sentences are the better punishment for murderers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247093023256 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.154069767442 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0610465116279 0.0946595960268 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0494186046512 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0610465116279 0.0437548338989 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.142441860465 0.122226691241 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0348837209302 0.0403226058552 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81742254951 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0232558139535 0.0326793684256 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.093023255814 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0494186046512 0.021408717616 231% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00872093023256 0.011925033212 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1923.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16346153846 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384615384615 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.333333333333 0.28420135186 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24358974359 0.203846283523 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.182692307692 0.137316102897 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81742254951 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.037074148 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467948717949 0.56093040696 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.2440477403 60.7387585426 76% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2857142857 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.426166358 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.357142857 127.492653851 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 55.619047619 49.1944974215 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.6043956044 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294205783147 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145596469216 0.102741220458 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0958810859701 0.0668466124924 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.66194641439 0.534860350844 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135217458857 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141691639805 0.134430193775 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067763654053 0.0742795772207 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33831012325 0.324371583561 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0632796553171 0.0638462369009 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20215674461 0.228012699653 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507533330509 0.058150111329 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.68436873747 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 5.90881763527 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 13.0 2.5751503006 505% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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