The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology for outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The main purpose of nuclear weapons is maintaining of the whole world to be peaceful. In addition to this, the nuclear energy, which is used to make nuclear weapons, provides environmental friendly energies. Therefore, this natural resource appears to have more advantages than that of disadvantages. Even though the environmental friendly natural resources seems beneficial to society, the problem with the waste and the potential accidents will damage the environment significantly and which may not be able to recover for more than a few decades.
In terms of its benefits, nuclear power is cost and environment efficient for its long lasting use. A nuclear power has a great reliability in terms of providing a long lasting energy source. According to the science journal, the nuclear energy can be used for over 540 years without any interruptions such as weathers or malfunction. In other words, the costs involve for maintenance and reconstruction will not be needed, thus, the costs for using this natural energy are cheaper for its efficiency. Furthermore, this energy source does not release any toxic emissions unlike fossil gases, which usage is beneficial for the environment to be greener. Therefore, nuclear energies are the cleanest and efficient forms of natural energies.
Despite all these benefits of nuclear power, it cannot deny that the nuclear energy is the main source to make the nuclear weapon, which is the most powerful and deadliness weapon in the world. For example, Fukushima cases in Japan damaged whole Asian Pacific Ocean due to the leakage of nuclear energies by the earthquakes. Even this happens 20 years ago, its consequences are still remaining. Also, the wasting the left over nuclear energy can be a problem. Even though nuclear power does not release any emissions, it has the leftover wastes and which wastes must handle with caution. The wrong way to handle of this waste can damage the environment or it can create another pocket size of nuclear weapons. Therefore, the consequence of the use of nuclear energies is phenomenal and the damage to the environment is fatal more than it gives the healthy environment.
In conclusion, the benefits of nuclear energies in clean and efficient use can damage the environment with a massive destruction. Since the damage to the environment cannot recover for a long period of time, therefore, its disadvantages are outweigh the advantages.
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- The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e environment cannot recover for a long period of time, therefore, its disadvantages are outwe...
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Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
... time, therefore, its disadvantages are outweigh the advantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245977011494 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.124137931034 0.155533422707 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.128735632184 0.0946595960268 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048275862069 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0206896551724 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110344827586 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0229885057471 0.0403226058552 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87258845717 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298850574713 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.126436781609 0.0861772015684 147% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252873563218 0.021408717616 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114942528736 0.011925033212 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2430.0 1933.35771543 126% => OK
No of words: 391.0 316.048096192 124% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21483375959 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39641943734 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317135549872 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196930946292 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132992327366 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87258845717 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46547314578 0.56093040696 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.5118653121 60.7387585426 82% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5789473684 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8790834136 49.517814964 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.894736842 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 52.2925023556 49.1944974215 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.96428571429 1.69124875643 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.52659928532 0.332605444948 158% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135677655623 0.102741220458 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105955625319 0.0668466124924 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543023841723 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167142947001 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232392975225 0.134430193775 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102692090866 0.0742795772207 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.517253705418 0.324371583561 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0613533520247 0.0638462369009 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.40792914878 0.228012699653 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521902258763 0.058150111329 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.