Museums are buildings where things of traditional and cultural importance are stored and preserved. Most of the museums charge entry fees as it is required for maintainance of the place while, there are some who do not charge as they get enough funds from government. I think, besides some disadvantages there are many advantages of charging museum fees.
When a museum charges people for visiting, it uses the amount for welfare of the building, which, is very important to attract visitors, as it is not only the responsibility of government, but also people to take care of the objects of ancient civilization. For instance, the money collected can be used for renovation and maintainance of the museums, which is very crucial for preservation of things / objects inside the museum. In addition, an attractive museum, invites more people to visit the place, which leads to growth of tourism, leading to financial stability of the place, as number of people come to visit, there will be growth in food and transport industry, providing employment opportunities to the people living there.
Some people think, charging fees will have negative impact on people, as they might not come to museum as they may not be willing to pay. In contrast, museums might loose its significance as new generations might not be able to know the cultural and traditional values of their ancestors, as parents may not take them to museums because they are charged. Some might think why they need to pay as it is government responsibility to look after these ans they should not force public to pay, this attitude of individuals might effect the future generation. However I think, entrances should be charged, because when a place is neat and clean it tempts people to visit the place once again and they also recommend others, which will be beneficial to all and for this, we have to pay and support the government to maintain museums.
In conclusion, museums are values and cultures passed by our ancestors, so it is our responsibility to contribute to take care and preserve these objects and pass on to future generation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226463104326 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.188295165394 0.155533422707 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.058524173028 0.0946595960268 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0407124681934 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0534351145038 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114503816794 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0356234096692 0.0403226058552 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83202979843 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0534351145038 0.0326793684256 164% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0712468193384 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0330788804071 0.021408717616 155% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0229007633588 0.011925033212 192% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2115.0 1933.35771543 109% => OK
No of words: 355.0 316.048096192 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95774647887 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366197183099 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247887323944 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174647887324 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132394366197 0.137316102897 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83202979843 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.56093040696 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.6536420399 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 32.2727272727 20.7743622355 155% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0734627467 49.517814964 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.272727273 127.492653851 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2727272727 20.7743622355 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 0.814263465372 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 57.0614596671 49.1944974215 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.69124875643 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372840482097 0.332605444948 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.221933120222 0.102741220458 216% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0903433863405 0.0668466124924 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.686197988189 0.534860350844 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131709091392 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183642304236 0.134430193775 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722353856595 0.0742795772207 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352034482763 0.324371583561 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0519966019459 0.0638462369009 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247055039725 0.228012699653 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105205992619 0.058150111329 181% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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