Being celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think to be a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
It is evidently accepted that the great position comes with great responsibilities. As being famous is not an easy task, it is simultaneously difficult to sustain the position. Undoubtedly, being a celebrity such as a well-known film star or sports person will attract many problems along with the benefits. In following paragraphs, I will discuss the drawbacks and benefits associated with being famous.
To commence with, stardom is the dream of every human being. Once you become famous, you will get lots of love and respect from the people. Not only that, people love to emulate your look and style in their real life. Additionally, the celebrity will have a great number of fan and followers who are accounted as an asset of celebrity in today's cut throat competition. The success of any great person is now measured with the count of followers they have. More to it, having a huge number of fans avail you the more opportunities to flourish in your fraternity.
On the flip side, the fame comes with a price. Thus, being a public figure,most of the time the privacy of the celebrities get invaded by the media for the public news. It indicates that stars need to behave more wisely and with great presence of mind to avoid ogle and envy of critics on their publically private behaviour. Furthermore, getting more fame enforces you to live up to the expectations of your fans and, for that , you have to work really hard every time to break your own records. Finally, many times fame attracts threat to the life of the celebrity. Any famous film star or sports person are the assets of the nation and so, their lives become more precious to protect from any harm. To exemplify, film stars and sports men get threatened by the terrorists or gangsters for any unlawful demand.
All in all, looking into the privilege enjoyed through the stardom, I strongly believe that the benefit of being celebrity outweigh the drawbacks indeed.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: It indicates that stars need to behave more wisely and with great presence of mind to avoid ogle and envy of critics on their publically private behaviour.
Error: publically Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 334 350
No. of Characters: 1563 1500
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.275 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.68 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.545 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.965 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.476 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: A_GREAT_NUMBER_OF_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fans'?
Suggestion: fans
...e celebrity will have a great number of fan and followers who are accounted as an ...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have a great number of fan and followers who are accounted as an asset of celebri...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , most
...ith a price. Thus, being a public figure,most of the time the privacy of the celebri...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., being a public figure,most of the time the privacy of the celebrities get invad...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... expectations of your fans and, for that , you have to work really hard every time...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...o break your own records. Finally, many times fame attracts threat to the life of the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234501347709 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.145552560647 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.088948787062 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0485175202156 0.0501214627716 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0512129380054 0.0437548338989 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126684636119 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0485175202156 0.0403226058552 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66711352735 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0377358490566 0.0326793684256 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00269541778976 0.00163938923432 164% => OK
Determiners: 0.118598382749 0.0861772015684 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010781671159 0.021408717616 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00269541778976 0.011925033212 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1952.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84431137725 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308383233533 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230538922156 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161676646707 0.203846283523 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110778443114 0.137316102897 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66711352735 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.037074148 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547904191617 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 58.9853322863 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5555555556 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6400038797 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.444444444 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 41.6094477711 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.67032967033 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188637512367 0.332605444948 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119277584755 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749259185951 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530572078788 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131355553697 0.148594505496 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08311317698 0.134430193775 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907543363045 0.0742795772207 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389356885623 0.324371583561 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10491363084 0.0638462369009 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13526429198 0.228012699653 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813888728979 0.058150111329 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.68436873747 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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