The lecture refutes the passage completely; he mentions that when a company gave a project to a team of members, they realized that in the reality after six months, the result of the team work was not as convincing as presented in the passage.
First, the speaker states that in the team work some members got free ride. There were many members in the group who did not work and still got recognition. On the other hand, members who had worked diligently did not get deserved credit for their work. So, they were quite upset with this unjust. Hence the lecturer says that not all group members benefited from the team work as suggested in the reading passage.
Second, the speaker rebuts the statement made in the reading that the work is done quickly by the team as compared to an individual. He points out that it in fact took longer as several meeting were done in order to reach to a conclusion.
Also, some influential members affected the decision of the group like if an idea is presented by a member which is not supported by the influential members then that idea was dropped. However, a bad decision was taken into consideration in spite of the opposition of few members of the group because the influential members supported it. This indeed resulted in the failure of the project. Though, many group members were not ion favor of the decision, everyone was blamed at the end. Therefore, it is not beneficial for everyone as indicated in the passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...they were quite upset with this unjust. Hence the lecturer says that not all group me...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'in fact', 'in spite of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247349823322 0.261695866417 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.16961130742 0.158904122519 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0459363957597 0.0723426182421 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0706713780919 0.0435111971325 162% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0282685512367 0.0277247811725 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.159010600707 0.128828473217 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0530035335689 0.0370669169778 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51707706328 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0141342756184 0.0208969081088 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00353356890459 0.00154638098197 229% => OK
Determiners: 0.148409893993 0.128158765124 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0141342756184 0.0114777025283 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1471.0 1645.83664459 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 271.125827815 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7015503876 6.08160592843 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04852973271 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306201550388 0.374372842146 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263565891473 0.287516216867 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15503875969 0.187439937562 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0852713178295 0.113142543107 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51707706328 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519379844961 0.539623497131 96% => OK
Word variations: 49.7931627233 53.8517498576 92% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8461538462 21.7502111507 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5200012383 49.3711431718 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.153846154 132.220823453 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 21.7502111507 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 0.878197800319 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 46.2027429934 50.5018328374 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.71052631579 1.90840788429 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.531419791708 0.549887131256 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.169629921124 0.142949733639 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110131197018 0.0787303798458 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.624487003279 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190161470178 0.139662658121 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242480736862 0.266732575781 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968273863528 0.103435571967 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388515150778 0.414875509568 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0598806858582 0.0530846634433 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376843415112 0.40443939384 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273692382298 0.0528353158467 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.