As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology is evolving at a very fast pace and with the evolvement of technology, human beings are also getting evolved. Technology provides us a helping hand and with the help to this hand we are able to get our work done in fast and easy way without deteriorating our thinking skills. Hence, I’ll disagree with the above statement.
Technology has become a part and parcel of our life and at every place, from home to offices everywhere we are surrounded by technology. Technology has become more like a tool that makes our work easy and allow us to do multiple tasks at a same time. Let us take an example of household technological products like Washing Machine, Fridge, Vacuum clean. All of these things help us do our work without much labour, all we have to do is set some instruction for them and they will work according or help us in working at a better pace. Not like the old days when we need to wash our clothes, it used to be an hour of tiring and hectic job, but now with the help of washing machine we just need turn it on and work will be done without our manual presence or labour. Here we are depending on technology a lot but it is not affecting any of our thinking abilities or providing any deterioration to us. It just helps us do multiple tasks at a same time.
Even if we consider the case at our offices, like internet, photocopy machine or sensors. These all are used in our day to day life but they don’t challenging our thinking ability. Like for instance we need to get a of copy of bunch of important documents or need a copy of some client notes then instead of writing them all over again we can get them photocopied and get the word done in seconds. Same with the case with internet, if we need to call our client or any colleague at direct geographical location and we are not aware of the time at their zone then we can simple check the time zone difference and call accordingly. Here every time when we performing something, technology providing us the pace to complete our task as soon as possible. It is like giving an extra hand to us while we are doing our tasks.
Now even if we consider extreme scenarios like the Artificial Intelligence or some high critical thinking research work. Such big researches or developments require great thinking and aptitude. Therefore in order to improve the technology we are forced to improve our thinking abilities. Although such big achievements may make us depend on technology and force us to do to rely on them but on the other hand accomplishing these things are forcing to enhance our though process and thinking in all the possible ways in which new technology can affects us. Every major achievement in technology is the beginning to something new which is demanding more efforts and more thinking from our side.
On the whole with so much technological evolution, it may provide us with some downsides but at a wide perspective it is helping us to enhance us, our critical thinking and constantly pushing us to evolve more and more. Thus I would like to end by saying that technology, by no means is deteriorating humans beings instead it is acting as an medium to help us improve ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 774, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... our manual presence or labour. Here we are depending on technology a lot but it is not affec...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ility. Like for instance we need to get a of copy of bunch of important documents...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ts require great thinking and aptitude. Therefore in order to improve the technology we a...
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Line 7, column 449, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhancing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enhancing
... accomplishing these things are forcing to enhance our though process and thinking in all ...
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Line 7, column 545, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...ssible ways in which new technology can affects us. Every major achievement in technolo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...tly pushing us to evolve more and more. Thus I would like to end by saying that tech...
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Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: HUMANS_BEINGS[2]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean: 'human beings'?
Suggestion: human beings
...echnology, by no means is deteriorating humans beings instead it is acting as an medium to he...
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Line 9, column 340, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...g humans beings instead it is acting as an medium to help us improve ourselves. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'on the whole', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217741935484 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.18064516129 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0677419354839 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0467741935484 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.111290322581 0.0685040099705 162% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112903225806 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0596774193548 0.0351676179071 170% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69795836681 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0370967741935 0.0309702414327 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0822580645161 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0129032258065 0.0209618222197 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00806451612903 0.0139019557991 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3200.0 2387.08602151 134% => OK
No of words: 574.0 408.028673835 141% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57491289199 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89472135074 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.278745644599 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228222996516 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170731707317 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113240418118 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69795836681 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442508710801 0.524397521467 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.6109258266 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 24.9565217391 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1423013221 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.130434783 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9565217391 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.652173913043 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 47.7788213907 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.15238095238 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300384155044 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110277767654 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0751080992372 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.500847278085 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154107596867 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110817507941 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642642754057 0.0781384742642 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.405886754632 0.336927656856 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0653224264471 0.067059652881 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210439783917 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321058537717 0.0618886996521 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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