Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets,while people throughout the world are starving.
whether or not people should spend a lot of money on keeping pets there is a big number of people who are starving to death and that is a big issue nowadays but also there are some people who believe that keeping pets is very beneficial to everyone's lives.But i believe that this issue has both points of view.
First of all keeping animals is beneficial to many people throughout the world especially for those who are always under big pressure because of they're difficult jobs.So keeping pets is a very good way to reduce the stress at home.Also a lot of people like to walk they're pets to the park everyday which is really beneficial by keeping fit both the pet and the owner.Also pets are a really good company for the elderly ones because the younger parts of the family; like there children are very busy by they're everyday jobs and they're families which sometimes it makes them forget to take care of them so the older people can share they're emotions with thy're pets.Also dogs are very good to guiding blind people.And for this reason pets play a very important role in everyone's life.
But on the other hand too much money is invested in pets while some people disagree keeping pets because they feel that it is much more important to save more money to help other people who need money more than they do like the starving children in Africa.Also lot's of people claim that is dangerous to keep pets because they might carry some diseases with them and it could make people sick like for example a few years ago i got so sick to the point that i could die due to keeping a cat that i found on the sidewalk.
In conclusion keeping pets maybe makes people spend more money and time but life would be much more meaningless without pets.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253086419753 0.268076937826 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.182098765432 0.116061578633 157% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108024691358 0.0759168565197 142% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.0366838410393 151% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0277777777778 0.0131127313244 212% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138888888889 0.155750635184 89% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0379272487307 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.19217535938 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0401234567901 0.0210936926555 190% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0987654320988 0.0948980150116 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185185185185 0.00437022459523 424% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.00967000014798 192% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1749.0 1161.00487805 151% => OK
No of words: 319.0 196.9 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48275862069 5.90752243213 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.73763899035 113% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.263322884013 0.337110787985 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181818181818 0.247514529752 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1065830721 0.171178102325 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0658307210031 0.112407865282 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19217535938 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.546246751206 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.4663162438 49.3433353143 98% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 8.93414634146 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 79.75 23.0094962315 347% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 243.734871325 42.9750493124 567% => OK
Chars per sentence: 437.25 135.714022679 322% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.75 23.0094962315 347% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 0.689975730869 435% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 1.48048780488 1756% => OK
Readability: 97.9318181818 47.7609492067 205% => OK
Elegance: 1.61627906977 2.94281807926 55% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434624380493 0.418131533498 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.320185534064 0.181151798455 177% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0520469278242 0.0850326197045 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.706616315825 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.93737402298e-16 0.157042692854 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.269485892278 0.228904883108 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673793395219 0.108899403657 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312608287332 0.367819155151 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0498389213111 0.0812612215331 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269485892278 0.316326947829 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673793395219 0.0921553760075 73% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.