Because of the faster and faster pace of the modern society, people always prefer to work in a high efficiency. Thus trigger the debate in society about whether people should work quickly with the probability to make mistakes or work slowly to check everything alright. In my perspective, work quickly is essential to the success of companies or individuals nowadays.
Work quickly means you can public the product quicker, which is extremely significance to attract more users. People nowadays always pursue novel and cool things that never exist before, such like new computer games or electric cars produced by Tesla. If a similar product was published by your opponents before you, your product will be seemed as a copy one and have difficulties to dominate the market. Think about the first version of iPhone, it is obvious that it was not perfect at that time, but it was original and so cool, represented a new lifestyle and attracted so much young adults to try it and become fans of Apple. What a successful business strategy!
What's more, it is merely an impossible mission to ensure everything is correct by checking and checking again. A much more efficient and wide-used way is putting it in use, listening to users' experience and opinions, then keeping improving your work. Microsoft is a good example, every time they finish a new version of Windows, they do not spend lots of time on testing it because they know there is no perfect software. Instead, a beta version was published to let users try it and report bugs to developers. Therefore, Microsoft can fix those bugs quickly and publish a stable version eventually. This process not only prevents fruitless effort, but also makes the Windows operation system can always update in a pretty fast pace and benefit its users.
Admittedly, we need to care about details to finish the work perfectly. Everyone should not just work in hasty without consideration about consequence and quality, which will ruin your all effort. But we also cannot tolerant working too slow to miss the opportunity and make all the previous work senseless.
Work quickly and show your achievement soon is definitely an important quality for both companies and individuals in this rapidly changing society, which will make you prominent from others and ensure a better future. As the old saying goes, "Never afraid of making mistakes because that is a part of improving".
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 70
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232375979112 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.161879895561 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0731070496084 0.0866891130778 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.088772845953 0.046263068375 192% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0522193211488 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0913838120104 0.118717715034 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0339425587467 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63352303297 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0339425587467 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0835509138381 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023498694517 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130548302872 0.0139019557991 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2063.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 343.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01457725948 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393586005831 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276967930029 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166180758017 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104956268222 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63352303297 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594752186589 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 68.4632460188 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1764705882 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8791594988 48.84282405 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.352941176 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.352941176471 0.644075263715 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.8732635912 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.18103448276 1.45489161554 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4319617994 0.300154397459 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102823148044 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0786267609224 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.536968678092 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115814335578 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154973147173 0.114077575197 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738003254883 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.19433637008 0.336927656856 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0241323977231 0.067059652881 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253757411348 0.210909579961 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483492968246 0.0618886996521 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.