Because of the increasingly rapid pace of the modern society, people are always required to work efficiently. This current situation triggered the debate in society about whether people should work quickly with the probability to make mistakes or work slowly to check everything alright. In my perspective, work quickly is essential to the success of companies or individuals and more important than accuracy nowadays.
To a company, work quickly enable you to public the product earlier than your opponents, which is extremely significant to attract more users at the very beginning. People nowadays always pursue novel and cool things that never exist before, such like new computer games or electric cars produced by Tesla. If a similar product was published by your opponents before you, your product will be seemed as a copy one and have difficulties to dominate the market. Think about the first version of iPhone. The prototype showed in the Apple Event cannot even run smoothly, but the idea of it was original and so cool, successfully caught people’s eyes, represented a new lifestyle and attracted so much people to try it and become fans of Apple. What is a great business strategy!
What's more, it is merely an impossible mission to ensure everything is correct by checking and checking again. A much more efficient and widely used way is putting it into use, listening to users' experience and opinions, then keeping improving your work. Microsoft is a good example, every time they finish a new version of Windows, they do not spend lots of time on testing it because they know there is no perfect software. Instead, a beta version was published to let users try it and report bugs to developers. Therefore, bugs can be found and fixed quickly. After that, Microsoft publish a stable version eventually. This process not only prevents fruitless effort, but also makes the Windows operation system can always be updated in a pretty fast pace and benefit its users.
Admittedly, we need to care about details to finish the work perfectly. Everyone should not just finish work in hasty without consideration about consequence and quality, which will ruin your all effort. It pays to do careful check before deliver your work. But we also cannot tolerant working too slow to miss the opportunity and make all the previous work futile.
Work quickly and show your achievement soon is definitely an important quality for both companies and individuals in this rapidly changing society, which will contribute to make you prominent from others and ensure a better future. Although you might risk making mistakes, but it is totally ok, As the old saying goes, "Never afraid of making mistakes because that is a part of progress".
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 70
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 698, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...sented a new lifestyle and attracted so much people to try it and become fans of App...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
.... What is a great business strategy! Whats more, it is merely an impossible missio...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220703125 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.173828125 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078125 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.091796875 0.046263068375 198% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.05078125 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.087890625 0.118717715034 74% => OK
Participles: 0.041015625 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70947672854 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03515625 0.0309702414327 114% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.080078125 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01953125 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.009765625 0.0139019557991 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2757.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 454.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07268722467 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.392070484581 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29295154185 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189427312775 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127753303965 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70947672854 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 73.03327401 59.2087087015 123% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6363636364 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1836247727 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.318181818 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.318181818182 0.644075263715 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 49.9315178214 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.1049382716 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453563578057 0.300154397459 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.077525249609 0.103427244359 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0653477044344 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467250597029 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156042133587 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146027811054 0.114077575197 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845847126243 0.0781384742642 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267908011431 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0804896022671 0.067059652881 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290885410425 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456878832539 0.0618886996521 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.