Some people think that studying from the past offers no benefits to today’s life while others believe that history is a valuable source of information for us. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is thought by some people that studying history is irrelevant for the modern educational facilities and it much more effective to concentrate on subjects connected to the future specialty. There is also controversial meaning which relies that studying from the past is invaluable source of knowledge for contemporary people. I’m strongly convinced that studying history is indispensable for people, as it has its own advantages.
On the one hand, history seems like a useless information. If governments exclude this subject from studying curriculums, this will significantly ease educational process for children in schools and universities. They will have much more time to study subjects related to work, such as Math, Physics, Economics. Secondly, this is a good opportunity for government to spare a budget money for the teachers of history’ salaries.
However, the disadvantages of excluding history overweighting the advantages. It is a well-known fact, that history repeats itself and “who doesn’t know the history is condemned to repeat it”. The humankind is unchangeable. It has been making the same mistakes for all years of existence. If people will be aware about events that leaded to conflicts and wars, it will allow them to avoid such problems in the future. To give a clear example, my native country wallowed in war two years ago due low-educated politicians which stay in the top of Ukraine. They probably poorly aware about unavoidable war consequences. War is unreasonable waste of humans’ lives and budget money.
In addition, history is very important for creating your own business. Studying the economic part of the history, students may find out how people from previous centuries coped with diverse branches of business, how they managed people and encourage employees to work more effective and avoid conflicts and misunderstandings.
In conclusion, I totally disagree that history proposes no advantages today. Despite the fact that it has its own disadvantages, such as time consuming, history has lots of advantages which benefit contemporary society. We can’t avoid studying the history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'budget money'.
Suggestion: budget money
...ood opportunity for government to spare a budget money for the teachers of history' salar...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255102040816 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.158163265306 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0918367346939 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0357142857143 0.0501214627716 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0535714285714 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112244897959 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0382653061224 0.0403226058552 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.19682290873 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0255102040816 0.0326793684256 78% => OK
Particles: 0.00255102040816 0.00163938923432 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.0688775510204 0.0861772015684 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015306122449 0.021408717616 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0204081632653 0.011925033212 171% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2162.0 1933.35771543 112% => OK
No of words: 331.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.53172205438 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.416918429003 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.359516616314 0.28420135186 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.277945619335 0.203846283523 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.187311178248 0.137316102897 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19682290873 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589123867069 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 66.4827200534 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.55 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9237895469 49.517814964 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 52.5016616314 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.63917525773 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396207627663 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0716976321715 0.102741220458 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0485783373157 0.0668466124924 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481821378099 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165019830357 0.148594505496 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135645224104 0.134430193775 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690083108238 0.0742795772207 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249250566392 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.052488469157 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247002403563 0.228012699653 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645933881737 0.058150111329 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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