Information today is one of the basic needs of human being. Research demonstrates that advanced information exchange mechanism like highly developed vocal cord and complex linguistics have enabled human race to rule this world over other species. Even today quick and smooth exchange of information is highly required for any organization operating around us. And this transportation of information has been revolutionized by Internet and so spread that now it touches every aspect of life like education and government affairs.
First and foremost one of the basic need in human life is education which has recently been changed drastically by internet. As a result from learning small techniques to higher education is available for the whole world via internet. For example YouTube, a well known video streaming website, provides tutorials on topics learned in secondary and higher secondary level. Salman Khan, the founder of Khan Academy, specialized in producing educational content for high school students has been so popular that Google has funded this project and now these contents are being translated to other languages so that, they can be used throughout the world. Moreover high ranking universities like Stanford and MIT are also publishing videos of theirs class taken by their renowned faculty. Thus creating an immense opportunity for the aspiring youth eager to learn new technologies. This revolution in education, I believe, will take the human race to next level.
Furthermore, citizen life demands many services today, a large part of them is covered by government. Internet has made many of these services online and taken near to the people. Applying for the passport can be a very common example in this domain. Passport is a very important identity documentation specially when you go abroad. As a number of people of our country is employed in foreign countries, availing a passport is very crucial to their livelihood. Even three years before when the passport was being provided by a paper based process, it was time consuming and controlled by a small group of people who sometimes were involved in fraudulent activities. But very recently the complete process has been automated and taken online. That way now citizens can apply for their passport from home and after that need a visit to the local passport office for bio-metric information like photograph and fingerprint. Overall this process has made the life easy for many citizen living abroad and even those who are availing passports for other purposes.
In conclusion, it is clear from the above two examples that how internet has improved information based aspects of human life. It is considered to be the global operating model for institutes in education, welfare and all sorts of business and government as well.
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- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to higher education is available for the whole world via internet. For example Yo...
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Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... they can be used throughout the world. Moreover high ranking universities like Stanford...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261316872428 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.17695473251 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106995884774 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0576131687243 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0267489711934 0.0685040099705 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12962962963 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0905349794239 0.0351676179071 257% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.80122370467 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0185185185185 0.0309702414327 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0843621399177 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0082304526749 0.0209618222197 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123456790123 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2817.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 451.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24611973392 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379157427938 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310421286031 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246119733925 0.174417080927 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139689578714 0.112833075102 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80122370467 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 67.6204428282 59.2087087015 114% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6704023018 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.045454545 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 51.5421286031 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.84251968504 1.45489161554 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387390319126 0.300154397459 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0877168561131 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0590911175601 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.440463888944 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121540113995 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139362193012 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064887848417 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342120053577 0.336927656856 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0242216020044 0.067059652881 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282265659218 0.210909579961 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150147500525 0.0618886996521 24% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.