Reliable and authentic source of information is a fundamental prerequisite for research in any domain. In this case some people rely primarily on printed material like books, journals etc and others prefer internet for their specific content needs. This preferences may vary with the area the research being conducted. However being from an Information Technology background and considering the nature of my work I do prefer internet based contents for my research.
First and foremost, internet provides latest information which is a primary requirement for any cutting edge research. Researchers/ trying to advance a prticular solution, require to know the very last development on that particual topic which most possibly can only be found on the internet. As a result, today internet is being used as main source of information in the research community. For example, as part of a project during my undergraduate years, we required to make an estimation for computation power of a micro computer to solve a particular problem with a domestic data set. During the initial phase we collected some books, unfortunately, with backdated data considered useless with respect to contemporary hardware dynamics. As many other groups in foreign universities were working on the same problem, their research websites and draft papers published on the internet saved us and finally we could prepare the proportionate estimation and submit the assignment on time.
Secondly complain about the authenticity and correctness of the internet based content is common to all. People argue this due to the open and unregulated nature of publishing adopted by most of the websites today. Nevertheless we are the savior for ourselves here. As most of the open content sharing platform provides a mechanism for content review and rating system. Moreover, contents liked by most of the users are given higher priority than others, this way the right information comes to top very quickly. Anomalies can be found in very recent content, which is neither covered in any printed media as well. Furthermore, there are few platforms ensuring strict reviewing and moderation like online communities IEEE, ICSE and many more. These sites are mainly used by the researchers to publish their works and view others'. A panel of specialised group of people moderates the content before publishing. Although these are online communities, people can trust their authenticity resulted by the process known to people.
Finally, the ways internet can present information is advancing day by day, starting with multimedia, virtual reality towards holographic representations. These techniques of representation greatly helps to analyse the problem in a more visual manner where the human brain works most efficiently. For example, planetary research has been revolutionised when it adopt 3D graphics based techniques over the paper based formats. This is not possible in printed media, even object models will not be affordable. Moreover, digital representation also facilitate the tracking and modelling of the stars, which also enabled critical simulations, otherwise considered impossible on paper.
In conclusion today's dynamic world demands new research every day, required to be catered correctly along with better utilisation of time and budget. And I believe this contradicting requirements can only be served by using information available over the internet. And every research work published on internet will enrich it and initiate a perpetual effect on human advancement which otherwise would have been far more delayed with the decades old printing industry hindered by its bureaucratic process of publishing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... the area the research being conducted. However being from an Information Technology ba...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provides the latest'.
Suggestion: provides the latest
...search. First and foremost, internet provides latest information which is a primary requirem...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: knowing
...o advance a prticular solution, require to know the very last development on that parti...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
... adopted by most of the websites today. Nevertheless we are the savior for ourselves here. A...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
...rocess known to people. Finally, the ways internet can present information is adv...
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Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adopts'?
Suggestion: adopts
...esearch has been revolutionised when it adopt 3D graphics based techniques over the p...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27140549273 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.156704361874 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101777059774 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0565428109855 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0274636510501 0.0685040099705 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121163166397 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0662358642973 0.0351676179071 188% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.99668078747 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0193861066236 0.0309702414327 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101777059774 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016155088853 0.0209618222197 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0113085621971 0.0139019557991 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3693.0 2387.08602151 155% => OK
No of words: 567.0 408.028673835 139% => OK
Chars per words: 6.51322751323 5.86048508987 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.432098765432 0.338922669872 127% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.350970017637 0.251872472559 139% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.26102292769 0.174417080927 150% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.165784832451 0.112833075102 147% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99668078747 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 319.0 212.727598566 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562610229277 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 73.0171752806 59.2087087015 123% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 20.25 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7122514848 48.84282405 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.892857143 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 55.3470017637 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.90604026846 1.45489161554 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328105623886 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0636000851412 0.103427244359 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0441095436405 0.0752933317313 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.442053519161 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1094556832 0.151897553556 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107053325591 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428642239429 0.0781384742642 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335723578594 0.336927656856 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0465990104121 0.067059652881 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212127465414 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039524266931 0.0618886996521 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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