You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. John,
First of all I would like to wish you a great day and I hope this letter finds you in good health.
I am writing with regard to requesting for a long vacation and I hope to consider it as annual leave in order not to be deducted from my salary.
De facto, I am studying a Master degree in Information Technology and I have to prepare for the dissertation. This will develop my professional skills and it will assist to improve our work. Henceforth, I should be away to focus on my studies
Concerning the duration of the annual leave, it will be for 20 days, starting on 1st of February, 2017 and I will be on my desk on 21st of February, 2017.
As agreed with David, kindly be noted that he will be on behalf of myself. Accordingly, I have trained him well on how to use the system and handed over all my tasks to him.
During my absence, I will have limited access to my email, but I will be available over phone.
I look forward to receive your approval.
Yours sincerely,
Paula
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'February 2017'.
Suggestion: February 2017
...will be for 20 days, starting on 1st of February, 2017 and I will be on my desk on 21st of Feb...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'February 2017'.
Suggestion: February 2017
...017 and I will be on my desk on 21st of February, 2017. As agreed with David, kindly be not...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...available over phone. I look forward to receive your approval. Yours sincerely, Pau...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, look, well, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3612565445 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52794474747 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602094240838 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7816231154 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977771046517 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478314822664 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534760830152 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501690688074 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595806533399 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.