Education is important for children and normally, students obtain education mainly from school. However, some parents choose to teach their kids themselves instead of send them to school. And the number of parents who teach children at home is increasing nowadays. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this approach and settle with a conclusion.
To begin with, one of multiple merits of teaching children at home is that parents can protect their children from bully. School violence is a common phenomenon in school and enormous students have been bullied ...
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...proach and settle with a conclusion. To begin with, one of multiple merits of...
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...l learn to behave well from parents. However, teaching children at home has d...
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...ceive the same accurate information. To recapitulate, teaching children at ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58860759494 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81844617474 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522151898734 0.561755894193 93% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4373817511 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341401977971 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119597889276 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895135879391 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2700877129 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121633598177 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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