people attend college and universities for many different reasons. why do you think people attend colleges and universities?
Over the last few decades, the number of people who are inclined to attend colleges and universities have increased dramatically. Undoubtedly, there are so many logical reasons to attend colleges and universities, which depend on the condition of applicants are completely different. However, I believe that there are two significant reasons, which are more common all over the world as fallows: promoting the professional education, and getting access to more appropriate job opportunities. In this essay I will attempt to discuss both reasons in some details.
First of all, many people throughout the world are so interested in learning so many things, which improve their knowledge about a particular subject, especially their favorite major. These people argue that one of the most effective way to change their mind in a right way can is increase their education. this group are hoping to achieve their aims by attending colleges and universities.
Another important reason why people in many countries attend educational organizations is that having experiences and academic qualifications is one of the most important criteria for getting job either state-owned companies or private companies. As well as this, if employees promote their academic degrees, their position in company will strengthen absolutely.
To sum up, although the reasons of attending colleges and universities are many and various, there is a general consensus among people that having education should have great advantages in so many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51709401709 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0343354966 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598290598291 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5517185797 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.1 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306731119571 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120074882563 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101119681949 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191440325847 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614806595858 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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