Music is played in every society and culture.
Some people think that music brings only brings benefits for individuals and society. Others, however, think that music can have negative influences on both.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In these years, there is a growing recognition that music is one of the fastest growing areas of art in the world. However, impact of this trend is a subject of instant debate. Obviously, music has permeated in any parts of the world today and this is believed to bring some negative effects by some members of society while others oppose this viewpoint.
To define completely what music really is one can take an example of the main purposes why people appreciate it. Undeniably, music is mainly used just for relaxation and entertainment. Majority of people are aware of its positive effects as i...
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