Music is played in every society and culture.
Some people think that music brings only brings benefits for individuals and society. Others, however, think that music can have negative influences on both.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In these years, there is a growing recognition that music is one of the fastest growing areas of art in the world. However, impact of this trend is a subject of instant debate. Obviously, music has permeated in any parts of the world today and this is believed to bring some negative effects by some members of society while others oppose this viewpoint.
To define completely what music really is one can take an example of the main purposes why people appreciate it. Undeniably, music is mainly used just for relaxation and entertainment. Majority of people are aware of its positive effects as i...
- The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other while the opponents consider it unnecessary because money is misspent by the governments that receive it Discuss these two points of view and give your op 100
- Young people who are still at school often feel just as much stress as working adults What are some of the causes of this stress and how does it affect individual students 73
- The only way to reduce amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, education or shopping.To what extend do you agree or disagree? 97
- Young people in modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation Why is this the case What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people 30
- Men and women are different in term of their characteristics and abilities For this reason some jobs are better done by men and others by women Do you agree or disagree 80
flaws:
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Different Words: 170 200
More words, higher marks.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Characters: 1331 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.039 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.004 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.665 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.044 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.371 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.632 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5