Music is played in every society and culture.
Some people think that music brings only brings benefits for individuals and society. Others, however, think that music can have negative influences on both.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In these years, there is a growing recognition that music is one of the fastest growing areas of art in the world. However, impact of this trend is a subject of instant debate. Obviously, music has permeated in any parts of the world today and this is believed to bring some negative effects by some members of society while others oppose this viewpoint.
To define completely what music really is one can take an example of the main purposes why people appreciate it. Undeniably, music is mainly used just for relaxation and entertainment. Majority of people are aware of its positive effects as i...
- Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions of what individuals really want to do in their spare time To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods.To what extend do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal? 63
- Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 76
- A great amount of waste is becoming a social concern. What can individuals and governments do to reduce waste? Suggest possible solutions? 93
- Men and women are different in term of their characteristics and abilities For this reason some jobs are better done by men and others by women Do you agree or disagree 80
flaws:
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Different Words: 170 200
More words, higher marks.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Characters: 1331 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.039 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.004 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.665 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.044 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.371 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.632 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5