The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life can prevent the progression and cause people being lazy than before but, it should be mentioned that more facilities can save people's time and in reality it's a type of time's deposit. So, it is unjustified that we change our attitude and think pessimistic about luxuries and facilities.
It might be true that, luxuries and conveniences deteriorate mind and cause people rely on them and use their mind lesser than before. For instance, when calculator invented most of people use it and rely on using calculator instead of using their mind. So it should be considered that luxuries and conveniences is not useful always and may hurt human's life. It cannot be denied that, luxuries and more facilities help people to use their time better than before. For instance, by inventing calculator most of the company and factories have been easy than before and could do hard calculation without wasting time.
With all that said, luxuries and conveniences in contemporary life help humanity more than before. With the progression of technology and even the existence proportion facilities cause scientists think hard than before and create better technology and better facilities for human comfort. For instance, medical scientists could make effective drugs for some diseases and this work cause people use these drugs and their health be ensured even in some other fields like aerospace with it's progression cause people have a better perception from world and travel to the moon. However, with progression of world and scientist's corporation all around the world cause people who are far from their family could speak to their family with internet and cellphones.
Furthermore, facilities and conveniences make a situation that all people all around the world have community and use updated information and these can people think more and increase their knowledge. Moreover, luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life help the growth of humanity and it will develop the power of thinking and it increases their wisdom.
As a result, with the progression technology, human's need be increased and people need tools with least time and maximum efficiency. So it should be considered that, more facilities help people's comfort and cause people enjoy their life more than before even have more times to do their works. Consequently, luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life doesn't prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...es can save peoples time and in reality its a type of times deposit. So, it is unju...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... For instance, when calculator invented most of people use it and rely on using calculator ins...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...than before and create better technology and better facilities for human comfort....
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...need be increased and people need tools with least time and maximum efficiency. So it shou...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e times to do their works. Consequently, luxuries and conveniences of contemporar...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s and conveniences of contemporary life doesnt prevent people from developing into tru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31909547739 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78790441913 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429648241206 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0852008457 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.3125 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298745430596 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137296780975 0.0831039109588 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201724821889 0.0758088955206 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19994286142 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106857337691 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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