TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
In the modern era, planning and organizing are of great importance. Because of the inovation of internet, lots of information is being changed between humans that are living in different part of the world and this has allowed humans to make a complex world. One of the most controversial question regarding this topic is if young people should have the ability to plan and organize in the modern life? In my perspective, in order to be successful, young people have to know these skills for few reasons which I will elaborate more.
First, planning helps you to save time. Using time effectively and wisely is crucial because nowadays world has expanded a lot and you cannot manage to do everything in this big world without any ability to manage time. For example, you spend most of your time driving in taxies and waiting in traffics in mega cities if you don't plan your meeting in different location wisely. If you put like four or five meeting each day you spend your time in traffic and you may not reach the meeting in time.
Furthermore, organizing tasks helps your productivity. With a pre plan , organizing the tasks is much easier and this pushes you to maximize your productivity by thinking deeply about a subject before making the final decision. In modern world, those people who get reach works a lot. Making plans helps you to work more, and maybe this approach allows the person to do multiple things together at the same time. For instance, a survey that was conducted in Tehran showed that 90% of billioners of Tehran have multiple jobs, and they are able to do them because proffesional counselers organize and manage future plans of their companies.
Finally, there are complicated future events that you should be prepared for . World is very complicated now and it's very hard to keep track of every event that is happening. So you should give a part of your time to follow world's leading news to predict the future of politics or economic and use the predection wisely to go with the flow. This approach won't be be possible if you have not the ability to manage your current position with future changes that may occur. As a result, it is practical to make a plan for it.
To wrap it up, based on reasons mentioned before, it is very essential to have the talent of making plan and organizing in this complex world in order to avoid time lost and low work productivity. besides this, there are a lot of events that will happen in future that you should be prepared for.
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Essay evaluation report
between humans that are living in different part of the world
among humans who are living in different part of the world
One of the most controversial question
One of the most controversial questions
those people who get reach works a lot.
those people who get rich work a lot.
Sentence: This approach won't be be possible if you have not the ability to manage your current position with future changes that may occur.
Description: The fragment be be contains a repeated word
Suggestion: Delete a possible duplicate word:
Sentence: Because of the inovation of internet, lots of information is being changed between humans that are living in different part of the world and this has allowed humans to make a complex world.
Error: inovation Suggestion: innovation
Sentence: For instance, a survey that was conducted in Tehran showed that 90 of billioners of Tehran have multiple jobs, and they are able to do them because proffesional counselers organize and manage future plans of their companies.
Error: billioners Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: proffesional Suggestion: professional
Error: counselers Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: So you should give a part of your time to follow world's leading news to predict the future of politics or economic and use the predection wisely to go with the flow.
Error: predection Suggestion: prediction
flaws:
it is not for 'you', but for 'young people'
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
it is not for 'you', but for 'young people'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 443 350
No. of Characters: 2013 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.588 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.544 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.415 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.316 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.797 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.541 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.206 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...iting in traffics in mega cities if you dont plan your meeting in different location...
^^^^
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...helps your productivity. With a pre plan , organizing the tasks is much easier and...
^^
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e events that you should be prepared for . World is very complicated now and its v...
^^
Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...to go with the flow. This approach wont be be possible if you have not the ability to...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...id time lost and low work productivity. besides this, there are a lot of events that wi...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68027210884 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48086501731 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49433106576 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.412053883 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.05 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242934751263 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824196357512 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407470848891 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147793041625 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355394244508 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.