People mostly want to have a job that suits best for them. There is an argument whether we should follow the job done my our parents. However, it is not always the same in every aspects, but I agree with the above opinion due to multiple reasons.
Being a human being, we always prefer to do a task which are ease or facile. Our parents have much experience about their's jobs; thus, their progeny will have a ease while undertaking the same jobs because they can provide best guidance to their off-springs. In Nepal, for instance, it is seen that people who are merchant mostly have made their children a merchant because they, while doing their jobs, provide an environment related to practicing and learning business activity. Because of it, they become adept in business field at an early age and prefer to be successful typhoon. Similarly, we have also seen that a politician son prefer to be an politician. For this, we can give the example of Bush family, Gandhi family. Similar reason, I believe, lies for it too.
Moreover, The parent influence may be also a second reason. we know that children, youngster are inclined to their parents. Youngsters, especially children, are fascinated by their parents. They want to be their parent's. On other hands, if their parents are successful on their present career, They would suggest their son or daughter to pursue the same career because they suppose that the same profession will provide the similar success to their children and further they can guide their children well, even promoting to the higher position they haven't achieved. For this, you can take an example of Nepalese community: In Nepal, till now most repudiated profession is Doctor. Because elder doctor can provide basic background of medicine to their progeny, and also provide a definite guide and direction, it is seen that most elder doctors are making their sons and daughter a doctor.
However, some may argue that lower class worker don't want to make their son to do the same jobs such as sweeping, laundry, but still I insists that choosing a job similar to parents is suitable. He may get any other job but at the period of joblessness, he can get the job similar to the parents because his parent's may have some links which can be valuable for his job to get job. Further, he can also get a chance to upgrade his position due to the presence of amicable environment, provided by his parent friends.
Choosing jobs similar to parents not only provide a guide and favorable environment for growth of one's career but also experience and inclination to do that job; therefore, I recommend most people to do the jobs that have been doing by their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...irs jobs; thus, their progeny will have a ease while undertaking the same jobs be...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...ertaking the same jobs because they can provide best guidance to their off-springs. In Nepal...
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Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...seen that a politician son prefer to be an politician. For this, we can give the e...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... influence may be also a second reason. we know that children, youngster are incli...
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Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...n promoting to the higher position they havent achieved. For this, you can take an exa...
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Line 5, column 826, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'elder' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: elder
...te guide and direction, it is seen that most elder doctors are making their sons and daugh...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... some may argue that lower class worker dont want to make their son to do the same j...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'insist'
Suggestion: insist
... such as sweeping, laundry, but still I insists that choosing a job similar to parents ...
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Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...and favorable environment for growth of ones career but also experience and inclinat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80387931034 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49237000795 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463362068966 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.2113986957 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0952380952 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324591172819 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997369992103 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891978176155 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217702112268 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811570448042 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.