"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
Cooperation is the act of being in coherence with others and progressing in a path together. By having coperation with others when a task is being done makes the completion of task much easier as well as quicker due to the expieriences of various people in their life and therefore various paths or ideas to a complete a task would be obtained rather than working on a single task.
The important quality for people to have successful careers in government, industries and other fields is cooperation because in the outside world, the more you learn, the more you achieve. The process of learning cannot be done on your own because some complicated problems do need expieriences.. Only by learning and by expirience we tend to progress in our careers. Only by cooperation do we learn and also collect expireinces which are useful for our future endeavours.
Cooperation is important in industry because when a company is desigining an automobile, a group of mechanical engineers should work on the dynamics of the vehicle as well as thee, a group of computer engineers should work on the on-board computer systems of the automobile. Only if there is co operation within the intrabranch engineers and inter branch engineers can the product succeed and win accolades for them. This example can be extended to to governement as well as other fields to show that co-operation is one important attribute for preparing the young people for successfull jobs in their field of interest
Competition in some cases is helpful in succeding in life. Instilling a sense of competition in work or other fields makes a person to think of out of the box ideas to improve upon the product or decision. However, sometimes competition might hinder the progress if it is not healthy. Non healthy competition stops the progress or development of ideas.
Therefore by instilling cooperation to the young minds and preparing them for leadership in governement, industry and other fields is an important way for them to be prepared as well as succesfull in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...akes the completion of task much easier as well as quicker due to the expieriences...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...omplicated problems do need expieriences.. Only by learning and by expirience we t...
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Suggestion:
...namics of the vehicle as well as thee, a group of computer engineers should work ...
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Suggestion: to
... for them. This example can be extended to to governement as well as other fields to...
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...attribute for preparing the young people for successfull jobs in their field of i...
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...ssfull jobs in their field of interest Competition in some cases is helpful in ...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...he progress or development of ideas. Therefore by instilling cooperation to the young ...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...em to be prepared as well as succesfull in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, as to, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00292397661 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96487335176 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505847953216 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7185789551 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22357147062 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766213781796 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100234923707 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13748654324 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113562960849 0.0667264976115 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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