The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
The spontaneous growth of the global population is the biggest issue confronted by our mankind nowadays. There are a variety of reasons that lead to this prevailing hardship and I strongly agree that this continuous increase is the most critical problem which damages our society.
While many people make their complaints about the significant growing number of our population, there are certain causes that initiate this issue. Firstly, low education levels in several third world countries could be the leading cause of this undesirable rise. It is further explained by the fact that poverty and unemployment are the sources of this dramatic increase of birth growth. For example, the population in many African nations has gone up rapidly during the twentieth century. Secondly, the birth of a boy is more favorable in some cultures which create big families where mothers have to give births continuously until she has a son. A good example of that is many Asian countries such as China and Vietnam are blamed for the unbalanced gender rate.
From my point of view, I personally believe that this continuous increase of population could be the most detrimental problem of our humanity. First of all, the upward trend of population will obviously produce a lack of natural resources such as water and energy. This means citizens’ quality of life and well- being will be negatively affected. Next, there will be more social issues that decrease the communal security and safety as well as causing government’s dearth of control over the society. This could be proven by the rising number of crimes, poverty, unemployment and the spread of diseases.
In conclusion, there are many possible risk factors that contribute to the unavoidable growth of human population that is becoming the most controversial issue around the world.
- The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries 62
- The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000 78
- the table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 78
- The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007 77
- The percentage of people using various mobile phone features 62
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23905723906 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80140345708 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9672731482 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198485172635 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061875315872 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470171093768 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115787818664 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199479079917 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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