The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
Animals should have rights or not has been controversial subject. I think that zoo plays vital role to spread knowledge of animals and therefore should be continue their current work. In this essay I will discuss about importance of zoo in our life.
Firstly, as the most powerful creature on earth, we do not have right to limit or restrict other animals. People nowadays do not know about different species of animals and what problems they are facing to survive. In such environment, zoo acts like school which gives lessons on different animals, their habitat and unique power. For instance, many people only know about specific animals when they visit the zoo and then follow these creatures throughout their life. Therefore, zoo is the essential part of our society to spread awareness about biodiversity.
Secondly, millions of species are today on verge of extinction and it requires marathon efforts from everyone to avail best atmosphere to such endangered animals so that they can live freely on the earth. Through, zoos we can educate people on this subject and teach them lessons so that they can restrict their harmful activities which is dangerous to animals. For example, schools can have zoo visit which educate children about animals and their problems.
In conclusion. zoo plays essential and critical role to educate citizens on how we can provide best living environment to all living creatures. Therefore we should accept zoo as the part of our society and have to utilize it in a right manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54638253135 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0429306339 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29058710204 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117526645481 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097607589331 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205450602115 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985648874855 0.0609392437508 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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