You are going to visit New Zealand for an " English and Home Stay Program". You have just received details of your home stay host family. Write a letter to your host family, in your letter: Introduce yourself, Ask the family some questions to get information that is important to you, Tell the family about your arrival date and time.
Dear Sir/Madam:
Good day! It is of my great pride and privilege to be chosen as one of the candidates participating in the upcoming " English and Home stay Program". In relation to this, I have just received an email from one of the coordinators of the said program and turned over your details so that I may able to contact you personally.
I cannot hide my excitement once my name was selected for the opportunity to experience your homeland. New Zealand was one country I am planning to visit because of its rich culture and friendly Kiwis. Having been appointed as my host family, I am glad to know more about our arrangements. I would like to ask if there are some house rules you strictly comply with because I am afraid I may not able to follow those. Also, if there are areas of concern regarding the materials I need or need not to bring that will aid in the success of the program.
In addition, I have already booked my flight two days before the commencement of the event so that we could still meddle upon few concerns. I will arrive on the 10th of March at around 3:45 in the afternoon of your local time.
Please do not hesitate to contact me through my email address (fionajvcruz@yahoo.com.ph) should you urgently need to hear from me. Looking forward to meeting your family soon!
Respectfully yours,
Fiona Joanna V. Cruz
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| 2017-02-13 | Fiona Joanna Cruz | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bring'?
Suggestion: bring
...arding the materials I need or need not to bring that will aid in the success of the pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, regarding, so, still, in addition, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64876033058 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88334126562 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661157024793 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.7242770141 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.272727273 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263247185237 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790704963902 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527313218675 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136625697419 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831143655849 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.