Supporters of technology say that it solves problems and makes life better. Opponents argue that technology creates new problems that may threaten or damage the quality of life.
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Some people believe that technology addresses difficulties and can make life desirable to live in. However, others claim that it only constructs predicaments that may lead to deterioration of life. In my perspective, I partially assent to the foregoing statement due to convenience and sedentary lifestyle, respectively. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, the advent of technology has continually proliferating. Many individuals are getting into the trend of utilizing such benefits of automations. One example is owning private vehicles, equipped with high-technology features that can transfer people into other places at an instant. Moreover, the convenience of having these machines can make life more bearable by replacing the work intented for man. Hence, the birth of computers are truly become beneficial to mankind.
On the other hand, the drawbacks of technology cannot be ignored. People may tend to lead a sedentary life when using these advanced equipment.They may fully be dependent on the functions and operations computers has to offer to them. To illustrate, call center agents are almost 8 hours sitting in front of their computers not considering the strain they have endured while being at that position for too long.
To recapitulate, technological progress has immensely assisted individual in their everyday living making it easier for them to cope up with life struggles. On the other note, it has also given humans the tendency to reduce physical activity. Indeed, it will all depends on the person on how he will utilize what is available to him.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ife when using these advanced equipment.They may fully be dependent on the functions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38823529412 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08399896179 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3193245165 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168080971612 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530586001021 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500012754616 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099722349867 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251768981636 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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