Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People make an important and unimportant decision throughout their life. The decision change people's life well or badly but never go back to the past and continue their life. Some of the people could prefer to decide something with thier friends. On the other hand others could want to choose someting alone. I will explain two important reasons why people could prefer to make an inportant decision alone.
Firtsly, when people are alone they could focus on the choices more good than with someone. If someone are near the people who make a decision they affect the people but the decision could not be that the people want to do. For example, when I graduated in my high school I choose a university where I will get education in. My teacher adviced me but I did not want to go the university. If I would go some the university which my teacher adviced I would be unhappy. I noticed the case and I decided alone. At the end I am there where I want to be and I am very happy. This shows people should decide alone.
Secondly the fact that, If people will make a wrong decision they have to make it alone. They could be upset but If they make a decision with effect someone they are more upset than other case because they always think that If only I did not listen to them but this doesn't change the situation and they don't forget it through their life. For example, I decided an important decision affected my friends and I regreted about that decision and I really wanted to change it but It was impossible. After the day I have never listened someone when I decide an important thing. That's why I think this way.
To sum up, People decide alone because of they do not regret due to the decision and they do not make an decision which they don't want to do. In my opinion, if they does not make a true decision they should decide alone. I strongly belive that this way is the best for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ck to the past and continue their life. Some of the people could prefer to decide something...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...more good than with someone. If someone are near the people who make a decision the...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ut I did not want to go the university. If I would go some the university which my...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... only I did not listen to them but this doesnt change the situation and they dont forg...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...is doesnt change the situation and they dont forget it through their life. For examp...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted to change it but It was impossible. After the day I have never listened someone w...
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Line 5, column 573, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...meone when I decide an important thing. Thats why I think this way. To sum up, Peo...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
... way. To sum up, People decide alone because of they do not regret due to the decision and t...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ue to the decision and they do not make an decision which they dont want to do. In...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...they do not make an decision which they dont want to do. In my opinion, if they does...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...dont want to do. In my opinion, if they does not make a true decision they should de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39943342776 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21845771266 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419263456091 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7273055138 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9523809524 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192920542096 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708146647389 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631251335928 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14170564018 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387834975237 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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