In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why?
In the last decade, there were many inventions like antibiotics, aircrafts and computers discovered which boosted human life to new level. Out of them, as per my opinion, computer is the greatest invention as it offers great assistance in every aspact of life.
Firstly, even though we observed many discoveries in medicine and space sector, still if we closely exmine then found that computers played critical role in all these inventions and assisted scientists in their research. For instance, today it is not possible to analyze micro level bactaria or virus without help of the computer. Therefore, computer played huge role to discover many new things.
Secondly, today computers spreaded across all levels in every sector. They made our life easier, confortable, secure and enjoyable. From children to elders all are using personal computer for different purposes. For instace, today in most of the countries computer education made compulsory so that from childhood itself all children can learn computer and utilize this machine for their growth. Hence, computer nowadays become integral part of every system and plays huge role to make effective working of the system.
In conclusion, even though mankind observed many life changing discoveries in the past 100 years, with close analysis we can say that computer is the greatest discovery out of all as it changed our life significantly.
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Suggestion: much; little
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun life seems to be countable; consider using: 'many lives'.
Suggestion: many lives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33783783784 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65520194989 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7947833694 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125076113723 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446390660459 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038335947801 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830529933247 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310203925257 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.9550561798 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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