For a long time now as far back as the eighteen hundreds, humans have witnessed a rise in many inventions which have come to make living much easier. Such inventions include airplanes, computes and antibiotics, which have all benefited humans in many ways.This essay will discuss why out of these three inventions, computers are the most important invention to date.
The computer has a reach of many people in terms of improving its capability, unlike many other inventions which are can only be improved by the inventor or someone with certain key skills. This has made it possible for the computer to evolve in its power and ability since invention, initially it could only do much and it was also very huge which made it less portable. In this day and age the computer has become very portable and is available in almost all homes on the planet.
Secondly, the computer coupled by its magnificent processing speed and the internet. Every possible solution we require is in our finger tips. One can source for every solution required, including how to fly a plane or what medicine to take for what ailment. These makes the computer an all inclusive solution provider unlike other inventions which are only solve particular problems. For this reason, the computer is an indispensable item which has made the human race cope easier and grow in more knowledge. Furthermore, the computer has also come to make work easier by automating most of the tasks which consume a lot of time and energy.
In conclusion, there a myriad of inventions which are all significant in their own way and these inventions are irreplaceable and still serve a purpose to date. In my opinion, the computer is the most important invention till now. Its potential is enormous in that its power will continue to grow and the problems that it will help solve are immeasurable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 20.9802955665 10% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 31.9359605911 16% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 311.0 1207.87684729 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 60.0 242.827586207 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18333333333 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.78315768371 3.92707691288 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75131281795 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 49.0 139.433497537 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.816666666667 0.580463131201 141% => OK
syllable_count: 96.3 379.143842365 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6551724138 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.5 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.9669160288 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.25397266985 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216963682698 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163083170694 0.0925447433944 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740468519848 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216963682698 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 55.0591133005 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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