‘For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write.’ How far do you agree with this suggestion? How important is it for a child to learn to play a musical instrument, in your view?
Certainely a very interesting question has come in today's discussion. I strongly believe that learning a musical instrument brings darastic changes in the over all development of the children in 2-3 months.
Firstly, if we persist the children to put their concentration and energies towards reading and writing then it would rather become more montonous and less enthusiastic for them. It can make the childrens either more frustrated or perhaps commit a sucide because of their inability to cope up with exams, peer pressures and family.
However, Childrens should be encouraged to practice music as it improves their cognitive process of the brain and helps them to develop the attention especially of the young pupil. Furthermore, it helps them to complete the homework on their own without seeking a help of the tutor. For example, children who practice music on a daily basis avoid the mistake of redundancy in their homework. Furthermore, these kids become a better decision maker by helping their parents to cut down on the unnecessary household items. Secondly, it improves their ability of reading comprehension passages where they can easily scan and skim the text to find the right answers.
To conclude, I have no doubt in saying that by learning music children can become more attentive and sharp which can help them to excel not only in their academia life but also in personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74328187818 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64347826087 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2241856862 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139104681743 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568917916594 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514505078998 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875976802102 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262328645092 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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