The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates four various types of transportations that were used in going out to and from works in a European city in three different years as 1960, 1980 and 2000. Overall what stands out from the chart is that while the use of cars increased dramatically over the time period mentioned in the question, others decreased.
With regards to cars, starting at just over 5% in 1960, the proportions of travellers went up drastically to around 35% in 2000, making it the highest number as opposed to the rest. Now, moving to bus, even though it stood at approximately 18% in 1960, after tw...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-21 | Sai sushma | 67 | view |
- As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.To what extent 90
- Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 85
- Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high, while others argue that sports salaries are fair. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 97
- Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of giving international aid to poor countries. 84
- As child obesity becomes a serious health issue in today’s society, some people feel that TV commercials advertising junk food aimed at kids should not be shown before 9pm.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? 74
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Now, moving to bus, even though it stood at approximately 18 in 1960, after two decades, the rate rised sharply to about 26 followed by a rapid decline to finish at nearly 16.
Error: rised Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 201 200
No. of Characters: 915 1000
No. of Different Words: 125 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.765 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.552 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.803 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.325 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.402 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.039 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Can i write increased sir?
Can i write increased sir? Thank you.
'rise' means become higher,
'rise' means become higher, while 'increase' means become larger, so better use 'rise' here.
We can say : a skyscraper rose 1,250 feet above the city, but not that it increased 1,250 feet.
We can say : the sun rises in the east, but not that it increases in the east.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, nevertheless, regarding, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75621890547 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.809751871 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651741293532 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.024408743 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278668360392 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105346843444 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914911806533 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175610850215 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605152974175 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.