Failure and success are few keywords that are always part of a matter of debate, not only in discussions but also, in real life. As night follows day similarly, failure follows success. Over this higly debated topic of success and failure, something that binds and holds onto to the hope of success even in bad situations is optimism. To achieve success and high asperations of goals, one needs to be optimistic in attitude towards it. Sometimes, failure plays key role in order to teach us the value of success, it is when the ultimate hapiness comes. In my perception, to remain happy and optimistic when we fail is more important than achieving success. To assert this idea some light is thrown in paragraphs mentionedbelow.
First important key aspect is, without knowing failure we cannot admire the true happiness of success. A person who has always been successful or has not been into a pain cannot describe what it is to feel when success comes and he might not put into all his efforts to achieve it. When success is certain it does not make someone much happy but when it is uncertain and comes to us it certainly is most important. For instance, failure to a student might make feel embarassed but, it enforces him from within to work hard and clear exam perhaps excel it. And, the moment of passing exam a that time is no less than a jackpot.
Second factor for cosideration is failure urges person to use it's effort cent-percent and constantly thrives for pushing it's competitors behind which sometimes is beneficial to the society. For example, existence of too many technical production companies is the key to invention. The fear of lacking behind in new invention of technology, gives these companies a competitive edge to show up with epic technology, which in turn fosters others to come up with some new technology next time. Consequently, making people feel happy to cling on to new dreams and aspirations.
In a nutshell, to sum up the assertions as conclusion I feel that failure is what makes us to stand-up again everytime but, with more vigor and more enthusiasm. As someone said failure is a stepping stone to success can never be refuted but, we must always be optimistic towards our approach and hard work even if the time is not ripe. Like winters follows summer, day follows night, failure follows remakable success of creating it's own records and breaking them again in order to achieve more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...nvention. The fear of lacking behind in new invention of technology, gives these companies a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, similarly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81145584726 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65845625923 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54892601432 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9410470064 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.105263158 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30883679115 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100123225567 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155803863841 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180950000452 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130469893212 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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