Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive development or a negative development?
It seems like things has been changed completely as they were used to be where we used to witness hostility between two nations. But in present scenario, the nations have become more common because they give flexibility to people to purchase products while watching television in their home country. I strongly believe that this will bring positive development in the economy.
Firstly, Goods are becoming easily available for foreign nationals because of the relaxation in import duty in trade has made it too easy for almost all the countries to fulfil people needs. Let's consider the case of the apple, on it's day of release their new version of the laptop across all online stores so it can be accessible to the people residing in the different part of the country. Furthermore, they have setup their authorized retail centres in every part of the country so that they can fix the issue of the consumer only if they face any difficulty.
However, there are many positive aspects to it which I would highlight in this paragraph. For instance, if a consumer gets the delivery of the apple product on the same day or few hours later which was also launched first in it's host country. This purchasing experience would not only make them excited but they also don't get a feeling of discrimination. In addition to this, they would share and rave about the product on all social media channels, which will make them famous for few days among their friends. Finally, it can create more jobs for the young graduates in the economy which will have a direct impact on the gross domestic product of the economy.
To conclude, I firmly believe that people share the same buying experience which is equivalent to the native person of that host country because of leniency in import duty in trade. Therefore, it has helped people to avoid the feeling of discrimination and have created job opportunities for the young guns of our country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to being'.
Suggestion: used to being
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have set up'?
Suggestion: have set up
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8343373494 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53735876553 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3638743941 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185134317488 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679559779415 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528408068276 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113780457198 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390786009418 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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