Globalization is an existing phenomenon that has been steadily increasing over the last one decade. People are becoming consumers of goods from global companies, following trends and sharing similar habits. I believe that this tendency is a negative development and I will develop my arguments.
Firstly, regarding their national identity, people are becoming identical, forgetting their roots and their culture. Citizen of the same world does not mean that people have to follow the same trends and buy the same things. For example, having much the same music preferences or eating the same food worldwide, can lead to an immense lack of their traditions and habits that identify them as a nation. This could be catastrophic for the world’s diversity, something that also evolution implies on.
Additionally, a high degree of similarity between people who use to buy same products anywhere in the world can have a negative impact on their interpersonal relationships. When someone owns common things and consumes similar goods with many others, can possibly become more competitive, causing imbalances in society and more often conflict with their fellow citizens. This kind of issue can unsettle the current balance and result abnormalities to humans’ relationships.
To conclude, although it is widely accepted to follow the same trends and buy similar products, no matter where you live in the world, I believe that this propensity has more negative than positive implications. The trend of consuming the same products may result in irretrievable loss of a person’s national identity and affect their relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50592885375 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02076634197 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1035278291 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333223191042 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111996560498 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846828514672 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193129752101 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365480985497 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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