Children should never be educated at home by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Talk about education for children, I disagree that parents should never be tutored their children at home. I will explain in these paragraphs to support my statement.
Children are young generation who can decide viability in the future. To rear superb children, parents should offer them superlative education which they can start at home. All of parents in the world thoroughly are proud to be a mother and father for their kids. They will array exactly about insurance, education, and all of the best things of great future for kids. To support these, firstly parents should build exemplary behavior for their children such as table manner, well behave, and religion. Apropos to Independent Parents Magazine surveys, 90% of Indonesian kids who have great qualification at school acquire decent training in their home. This research believes that children will imitate their parents’ personality since children were toddlers. Therefore, the main determinants in success of child are manners and faith. Indonesian teenagers must gain religious education, educational attitudes, and behaviors as soon as possible. Then, people also assure that the easiest way to formalize praiseworthy habit is when children at home. Because they spend most of their time in home, parents can supervise the kids what they can obtain or not.
Meanwhile, surroundings of children are profound authority. When kids start to attend the school, they will encounter real society. To prevent the bad impact of environment, parents are the main role of those kids. Back to children’s behavior at home, it can be protecting them from unsavory biosphere both in school and out of their house. Even, poor environmental such drugs, cohabitation, and crime cannot predispose children because the strict education to set them is from their family.
However, not all of lucky children live with their parents. To preserve their education, governments should provide orphanages and free school for them to supersede parent’s position and they still gain proper education.
To assert, I assure that first education for children should be provided by their parents.
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